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8th Nov 2020 11:13am
Dear S,
Very touching. The ache behind the write so quiet and powerful. I had a catch in my breath the intensity of the piece kind of caught me unawares. Lovely write. H🌷
Very touching. The ache behind the write so quiet and powerful. I had a catch in my breath the intensity of the piece kind of caught me unawares. Lovely write. H🌷
9th Nov 2020 4:49am
Thank you so much, Honoria! Your kind words really made my day. Thanks for taking the time to comment.💕
8th Nov 2020 8:01pm
This is very lovely and reminds me of one of those oil slicks you see in the road after rain. I always used to tell my children it's where rainbows go to die.
9th Nov 2020 4:51am
Thank you for the insightful words, Ahavati! I'm glad that you enjoyed my little poem. 💕
