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First Kiss
It was a small disaster
You were catching on
But the start was rocky
You didn't know what to do with your tongue...
And the chain on my nose
Was getting in the way
I had to change directions
But it was a little too late
I laughed and said next time
Probably not with the chain
You laughed at the comment
Of a next time
... A satisfied grin on your face.
You were catching on
But the start was rocky
You didn't know what to do with your tongue...
And the chain on my nose
Was getting in the way
I had to change directions
But it was a little too late
I laughed and said next time
Probably not with the chain
You laughed at the comment
Of a next time
... A satisfied grin on your face.
Author's Note
But it was perfect :)
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4th Nov 2020 6:22pm
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4th Nov 2020 8:27pm
Tender moment Boo, have patience he'll get it right. There is a lot to investing that time even at the very beginning. The chain maybe a problem at first but soon he'll be able to add it into the kiss, tight piece
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4th Nov 2020 8:42pm
He learns quickly and is good at catching a rhythm, hopefully he'll feel more relaxed next time too. Thanks for the support, I
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5th Nov 2020 2:58pm
Cute. Indeed I sometimes wonder how the young do it these days, what with all the gizmos on tongue, hanging from nose etc....
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6th Nov 2020 5:26am