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One Word at a Time
Well,
What next and,
... how soon
Why leave and,
.... where to
When is good or,
Is that bad
Wouldn't you or,
Shame on me
Light and dark is clear to me
What are you blinded by
What next and,
... how soon
Why leave and,
.... where to
When is good or,
Is that bad
Wouldn't you or,
Shame on me
Light and dark is clear to me
What are you blinded by
Published 3rd Nov 2020
Author's Note
I'm not sure what to expect
....I know what I'm not gonna do
....I know what I'm not gonna do
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26th Dec 2020 8:06pm
19th Feb 2021 12:52pm
I like the last two lines. If I were you I’d remove all punctuation and capital letters, as that would allow a rhythm to come through.
Thank you really....
Dropped out of school a year too early...
I was that one...
Who didn't come back with the rest of em'.
....a spring break,
That I'll never agree that has lasted too long.
Dropped out of school a year too early...
I was that one...
Who didn't come back with the rest of em'.
....a spring break,
That I'll never agree that has lasted too long.
