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Brittle
I remember the times i would like to forget.
I look back with regret while my palms start to sweat.
Innocence isn’t embraced but rather looked back at when lost.
My innocence was taken, hate given in return for free at my cost.
Brittle.
Even now while i’ve grown.
Still little.
I look back with regret while my palms start to sweat.
Innocence isn’t embraced but rather looked back at when lost.
My innocence was taken, hate given in return for free at my cost.
Brittle.
Even now while i’ve grown.
Still little.
Author's Note
I want to thank a special person i met here for helping me build up the courage to post.
You know who you are :)
You know who you are :)
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Re. Brittle
3rd Nov 2020 3:29am
It's a brave, honest and poignant write and a very successful first attempt.
Well done you.
Ty for sharing.
🌹
xo
B
Well done you.
Ty for sharing.
🌹
xo
B
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Re. Brittle
3rd Nov 2020 12:40pm
This is sad, but has a nice tight flow to it. Please continue to post, may be try to write some of the pain out
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3rd Nov 2020 6:57pm
Re. Brittle
3rd Nov 2020 7:00pm
Thanks for releasing your obvious talent. Every writer has to take that first step which always begins with one word. Look forward to reading more from your talent abilities. Peace. oral
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th Dec 2020 11:45am
5th Dec 2020 3:09am
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18th Dec 2020 00:11am
Re. Brittle
19th Dec 2020 1:55pm
Excellent write ...crisp ... great flow ... love the line length variation ... nice vulnerable write ...
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20th Dec 2020 1:28pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
28th Jan 2021 9:29pm
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21st Sep 2022 3:27am
Re. Brittle
23rd Oct 2023 11:33pm
'I remember the times I would like to forget". I love that and line and sadly can relate to it. Thanks for sharing.
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