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Reconstructed Comment (to Javalini, regarding the "Demise..." poem)

  
 ~~ Aw, cmon. Brighten up, pal. ~~  
   
yeah, right. Demise of us, no kidding! Things are falling into place as the  
 beginning of the end    
of amerikan demo'crazy,  
 amerikan free'dumb,  
 amerikan hypocrisy,  
 amerikan whiteMan,  
 amerikan amerikanism
.........etc. & so on.  
[no matter who  
                             wins  
the coveted crown of usOFa]......  
   
the patridiots are coming !  
the patridiots are coming !  
the patridiots are coming !  
with  
their (semi)automatic weapons.  
their GI Joe apparel.    
their knives, grenades.  
" and Martha. Don't forget 'load'  the survival  
            packs and gear".  
   
"The best laid plans of mice and men.........."  
   
Hey, fellow peasants! This country was "founded"    
    to benefit the coffers of whiteman (protestant), "landed gentry", slave-owning, opportunists.  
         Even white poor men couldn't vote without owning land, (stolen from Natives),  
And women! Hoo'wee. Forget that shit.    
         Liquor was distributed freely to those who could vote, by candidates and their  
henchmen. Voting Day was a get-drunk holiday, party-time to influence those who could not vote to "support" the cause of whatever candidate.  
          White Men who were ineligible to vote, were hired by candidates to keep the peace with just a wee bit of intimidation, at polling places that were on the candidates  
"turf"  
         All (wealth holding) white men are created equal.......Liberty and justice for ALL (for all patridiotic white guys )
   
   
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2020nov2dankozakPoomPlusBadFoto(damnearEveryday),dkzk
Written by dkzksaxxas_DanielX (DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)
Published | Edited 4th Nov 2020
Author's Note
God Blitz Amerika... (it's happening, as we speak, kids)
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