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Blessing
dying a little
every single day
it’s all brittle
this ignorant way
lost the hope
fading faster
hanging rope
heart of alabaster
promise a dream
why does it matter?
voices scream
toxic bladder
passing stones
corrupt system
trading bones
there’s no gem
crawling inside
hollow reason
ride the tide
bastard season
simple Simon
bought the host
clouded diamond
rich men toast
old white fucks
are a cancer
lonely cucks
chasing a dancer
a simple bitch
follows blindly
aggravated twitch
grind me kindly
selling rights
for window dressing
surrender fights
call it a blessing
every single day
it’s all brittle
this ignorant way
lost the hope
fading faster
hanging rope
heart of alabaster
promise a dream
why does it matter?
voices scream
toxic bladder
passing stones
corrupt system
trading bones
there’s no gem
crawling inside
hollow reason
ride the tide
bastard season
simple Simon
bought the host
clouded diamond
rich men toast
old white fucks
are a cancer
lonely cucks
chasing a dancer
a simple bitch
follows blindly
aggravated twitch
grind me kindly
selling rights
for window dressing
surrender fights
call it a blessing
Published 31st Oct 2020
Author's Note
To all the Poetess's. I mean bitch as weak, and fragile. more about men, not women. but those who follow blindly..
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31st Oct 2020 1:50pm
7th Nov 2020 00:12am
31st Oct 2020 5:03pm
Wow Dave this is so sad I hope you can find some happiness somewhere soon.
Stop drinking? so much dear friend I love you
Chin up
Always Your sister Jackie ❤️🤗
Stop drinking? so much dear friend I love you
Chin up
Always Your sister Jackie ❤️🤗
7th Nov 2020 00:16am
Jackie, much appreciated, I didn't write this about alcohol abuse. although maybe I did without knowing. I was writing about our world, but that is deep you thought I was admitting my vices.. thank you so much.. love you..
Dave
Dave
9th Nov 2020 8:17am
Yes, a very nice, concise and blistering commentary of the sickness that has permeated our world. It is a very sad state of affairs.
Thank you fir the read.
Thank you fir the read.
11th Nov 2020 00:22am
Lady Elsiean.. honored by your commentary.. thanks for reading.. much appreciated..
Dave
Dave
