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If only...
if only you knew
how much you mean to me
my days begin for you
and nights... nights long for your touch
my dreams are kissed by the stars and the moon
yet...
yet i refuse to dream...
cos i love to lie cuddled in your warm thoughts
thoughts ... that are treasured forever
in the caverns of my soul...
how much you mean to me
my days begin for you
and nights... nights long for your touch
my dreams are kissed by the stars and the moon
yet...
yet i refuse to dream...
cos i love to lie cuddled in your warm thoughts
thoughts ... that are treasured forever
in the caverns of my soul...
Published 30th Oct 2020
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30th Oct 2020 9:13pm
30th Oct 2020 9:21pm
Thank you, dear LDF for leaving such a lovely review 🌹 so glad to see this piece making it to your reading list 😊
30th Oct 2020 10:47pm
This is so beautifully written line to line respect dear poetess wink with a smile 😆🤗🙏😎👊
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31st Oct 2020 3:40am
Dear I,
Really pretty piece. I love the message as well as the lovely images written within. Very comforting poem. Lovely. H🌷
Really pretty piece. I love the message as well as the lovely images written within. Very comforting poem. Lovely. H🌷
31st Oct 2020 8:13am
Thank you, dear Honoria for the kind words. So happy to know that you found this poem comforting.. 😊
I really adore your visits. 🌹
I really adore your visits. 🌹
31st Oct 2020 8:04pm
The caverns of my soul—what a lovely source of imagery, Rohini. A lovely offering of love and yearning. xo
1st Nov 2020 8:11am
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Thank you so much, dear poetess for the kind review 🌷Very much appreciate you stopping by. 😊
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18th Nov 2020 5:17pm
If I were the subject, I'd be standing there red faced from blushing. You convey the intimacy while bearing your soul.
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29th Nov 2020 8:35am
Much thanks for leaving a wonderful review and adding this piece to your reading list. Really appreciate your kind visit, dear poetess. 😊🌹
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28th Dec 2020 1:43pm
You contributed to making my evening by sharing your great poem. Look forward to reading more. Hugs and peace, oral
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