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Everlasting

Forged with unity
Devotion beyond compare
Sempiternal love
Wh1skeySwagger
Written by Wh1skeySwagger (Swagger)
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Re. Everlasting
27th Oct 2020 6:59am
Kink has competition lol

Seriously though, nice poem
AspergerPoet56
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Re: Re. Everlasting
(Swagger)
27th Oct 2020 7:02am
I don't know about that lol

Kink is the freaking master of 17 syllables :)


Thank you AP
Wh1skeySwagger
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- Edited 8th May 2021 11:45am
27th Oct 2020 11:19am
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Re: Re. Everlasting
(Swagger)
28th Oct 2020 6:19am
Thank you Socks :) :)

I am glad you enjoyed it
Wh1skeySwagger
Re. Everlasting
28th Oct 2020 11:18pm
Beautiful, you definitely had me at 'sempiternal love'
KristinaX
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Re: Re. Everlasting
(Swagger)
29th Oct 2020 6:20am
Thank you for your kind words kristina

I am glad you enjoyed this
Wh1skeySwagger
Re. Everlasting
(Faith Elizabeth Brigham)
22nd Nov 2020 7:26am
Very beautiful, indeed!
faithmairee
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Re: Re. Everlasting
(Swagger)
22nd Nov 2020 8:15am
Thank you faith elizabeth I'm glad you liked it
Wh1skeySwagger
Re: Re. Everlasting
(Faith Elizabeth Brigham)
22nd Nov 2020 8:18am
Indeed, I did! It was my pleasure!
faithmairee
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