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sigh
beauty in death's keep
bound its dreams upon my soul
little echos of life
promises kept in memory
whispers become sighs
within my heart
then fades
Published 26th Oct 2020
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26th Oct 2020 5:15pm
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26th Oct 2020 11:05pm
26th Oct 2020 11:24pm
good afternoon Ron thank you for the love on this write it's deeply appreciated 💕
27th Oct 2020 2:46am
Dear B,
Sad yet enchanting piece for me. I love this line “ whispers become sighs”. Ethereal work of art this poem. Almost like an angel keeps passing by with these whispers.
I keep feeling resignation behind each line. Kind of a one foot in front of the other sort of day.
It’s lovely B! H🌷
Sad yet enchanting piece for me. I love this line “ whispers become sighs”. Ethereal work of art this poem. Almost like an angel keeps passing by with these whispers.
I keep feeling resignation behind each line. Kind of a one foot in front of the other sort of day.
It’s lovely B! H🌷
27th Oct 2020 3:05am
good evening beautiful Honoria I love you felt this poem... I lost a baby kitty today I was sad thinking of her...I'm happy it spoke to you ❤
27th Oct 2020 3:15am
I’m very sorry! That is sad news for sure. Sending hugs your way to hopefully ease that sadness. ❤️
27th Oct 2020 1:21pm
27th Oct 2020 3:03pm
Sadness in its terrible silence, which only the insides of our heart can hear..
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
31st Oct 2020 3:08pm
thank you beautiful Kitty for such a lovely and poetic comment I deeply appreciate it ❤
31st Oct 2020 8:44pm
The “promises kept in memory “ line is very profound and nostalgic.wonderful writing crimsin.
1st Nov 2020 00:00am
thank you graciously dearest Wally for such a lovely comment I deeply appreciate you ❤
