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Love Lost
It has been since dawn since they confronted.
Neither will come to find a common ground.
For beneath the sun, his mind congested.
He couldn’t choose life and hear natures sound,
Death was more of a choice than without her.
For he could not find a love like her.
From his wounds, he can make only a blur,
Just a fragmentation with his vocal.
His destiny had now come to life.
Published 25th Oct 2020
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Anonymous
25th Oct 2020 7:42pm
The pain of loss is always so very potent within it's first weeks.. Damn , months really..
of processing.
Please try and take that to heart. It's so fucking cliché but it's true that time heals all wounds..
Sometimes it's hard to realize that when your own pain is very raw.
There will always be a scar to remind, some more brutally ragged and ugly than others but the pain lessens and eventually becomes tolerable... then maybe just a dull ache.
Please reach out to ANYONE if you feel like you need to. There's always help available and no shame in needing it.
Take care, Daniel..
It will get better... just hang on.
Sending out positive and loving vibes your way
.....
💜🌹💜
xo
-B
of processing.
Please try and take that to heart. It's so fucking cliché but it's true that time heals all wounds..
Sometimes it's hard to realize that when your own pain is very raw.
There will always be a scar to remind, some more brutally ragged and ugly than others but the pain lessens and eventually becomes tolerable... then maybe just a dull ache.
Please reach out to ANYONE if you feel like you need to. There's always help available and no shame in needing it.
Take care, Daniel..
It will get better... just hang on.
Sending out positive and loving vibes your way
.....
💜🌹💜
xo
-B
26th Oct 2020 00:57am
Having experienced this emotional loss many many....................MANY time i wish i had learned knowledge to share but alas, i do not.
i am at my own crossroads where i am thinking of banning and blocking all ex's and all future wannbees. Perhaps deep thinking energies like me are better off with out that odd distraction.
For You, However, i am not so certain..............
i love Your ink spilled and want You to reconsider and study Your experience before making rash and or permanent decisions.
i am at my own crossroads where i am thinking of banning and blocking all ex's and all future wannbees. Perhaps deep thinking energies like me are better off with out that odd distraction.
For You, However, i am not so certain..............
i love Your ink spilled and want You to reconsider and study Your experience before making rash and or permanent decisions.
