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The Vampire's Secret (part 1)
Looking in to Scarlet eyes a kiss at the nape of her neck then a sharp pain. She was finally his "Ra-Raven stop it hurts." He didn't listen to her pleas as she was clinging on to his shirt her white collar was stained red with the bright red crimson that flowed through her veins.(Why does my body feel hot) She tightened her grip. Several minutes past after she was released from his grip her gaze was on a boy that had jet black hair and vibrant scarlet red eyes he leand down to her ear and spoke "I'm sorry you had to go through his Roe" he kissed the tears from her eyes and allowed her to fall asleep.
(Me: Uuhhhhhhhg i cant think of any thing else sry)
(Me: Uuhhhhhhhg i cant think of any thing else sry)
Published 31st Jan 2012
| Edited 1st Mar 2012
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1st Feb 2012 9:48pm
Nice...you really made me feel like I was there and I loved the imagry, can't wait to read part 2 :p
1st Feb 2012 10:44pm
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2nd Feb 2012 11:30pm
You did a good job here :) I enjoyed the read
2nd Feb 2012 11:37pm
3rd Feb 2012 00:18am
Ask me any question on these two charaters and I'll answer but if its something that might become a spoiler i not gonna say anything
3rd Apr 2013 6:41pm
