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Whats the point of living when you rather would be dead?
Unless you are a bullet stay out of my fucking head.
I'm so sick of all your lies and the bullshit that you spread.
You only wish to know exactly what I haven't said.
Underground is all that I am destined to be.
You may as well be blind because you'll never really see.
Hold onto your own and just let go of me.
Leave me alone and let me finally be free.
Unless you are a bullet stay out of my fucking head.
I'm so sick of all your lies and the bullshit that you spread.
You only wish to know exactly what I haven't said.
Underground is all that I am destined to be.
You may as well be blind because you'll never really see.
Hold onto your own and just let go of me.
Leave me alone and let me finally be free.
Published 31st Jan 2012
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31st Jan 2012 7:40pm
we all get fed up at times
our frustrations provides the signs
but only we control our minds
but the pressure can lead some of us to alcohol & lines
still others can believe that suicide is fine
but if they just Have Faith...The Godly Kind
then they would be able to let their Inner Light Shine....
our frustrations provides the signs
but only we control our minds
but the pressure can lead some of us to alcohol & lines
still others can believe that suicide is fine
but if they just Have Faith...The Godly Kind
then they would be able to let their Inner Light Shine....
1st Feb 2012 00:56am
I just want to clarify tha this was written almost ten years ago when i was only sixteen. I am not nor have i EVER been suicidal. I just went through the normal angsty teenager phase where i was writing a lot of dark and depressing poetry. Just wanna clear that up because i wouldn't want anyone to think I am suicidal. I do not agree with or encourage suicide as an answer ever regardless of how down someone may be. If you can make it through the darkness there is always a light at the end of the tunnel<3
1st Feb 2012 1:13am
i totally feel what you are saying & my comment was just what was inspired by your words....but nice clarification on your part still....;)
1st Feb 2012 5:21am
Just didn't want someone getting the wrong impression:) I do love your comment though, it is so true, if only people would just hold on and fight a little harder they would come out the other side stronger and better for it. Wasted lives are such a shame.
2nd Feb 2012 2:18am
