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feelings die when memories lie
sometimes a whisper, sometimes a shout
bad blood will...will out
keep to the truth of you and be happy
sinister stirrings will pass
on the winds of fate your undoing
if you heed not this warning
keep the faith of your lover
you're everything in his eyes
fantom wants are the killer
to a good thing gone awry
you'll cut out your heart to rewind time
kiss the sidewinder and you'll see
the metaphor of living
is in the keeper of hope's eyes
Published 20th Oct 2020
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21st Oct 2020 2:49am
21st Oct 2020 4:59pm
thank you graciously beautiful Kitty for reading and commenting I deeply appreciate you 💕
21st Oct 2020 10:05am
Beautifully written with love and understanding of the heart and soul even when it comes with lies leaving behind the absence of love that builds strength and courage and unselfishness nicely composed dear poetess..respect
21st Oct 2020 4:56pm
thank you graciously dearest Stoney for such a beautiful and thoughtful comment I deeply appreciate hearing from you 💕
21st Oct 2020 11:19pm
21st Oct 2020 3:31pm
So often that grass appears greener on the other side, doesn't it, Brenda? And too often the person who jumps the fence realizes it's greener because it's on a cracked septic tank.
Excellent write.
Excellent write.
21st Oct 2020 4:58pm
thank you beautiful Vati for a wisdom filled comment yes it does... sadly not until it's to late do many realize it... I deeply appreciate your thoughts here ❤
22nd Oct 2020 10:37am
26th Oct 2020 11:34am
24th Oct 2020 4:16am
Dear B,
“ fantom wants are the killer
to a good thing gone awry” so very true. Experience with that was a miserable shot in my own arse. Why do we want to sabotage the good we have been given just because something else seems shinier? Oh what a to do. Fabulous write! H🌷
“ fantom wants are the killer
to a good thing gone awry” so very true. Experience with that was a miserable shot in my own arse. Why do we want to sabotage the good we have been given just because something else seems shinier? Oh what a to do. Fabulous write! H🌷
26th Oct 2020 11:36am
hey there beautiful Honoria I don't know why we self sabotage so hurtful when we do... thank you for sharing your own insights and feelings here... I deeply appreciate you 💕
26th Oct 2020 00:09am
That second to the last stanza is very true. But the "you'll cut out your heart to rewind time" line resonates with me, perhaps bringing me old memories as well.
Well done.
Well done.
26th Oct 2020 11:38am
thank you dearest Wally relationships are tough sometimes I've found it's very important to think things through and avoid compromising situations as best we can...I deeply appreciate the read and sharing your thoughts here 💕
