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to you

I will scream out your names when I am through  
when the flickering flames catch up on my woulds  
all of my coulds and all of my shoulds  
i will scream out your names when i am through.  

When my fumes rise to the clouds up above  
i will scream out your names i am allowed  
i will scream out loud your names i am not proud  
through the voodoo you do screaming in, lurv?  

Should i whisper your names (i'll whimper your names)  
when grinding my bones (they must) back to dust  
i'll be screaming your names in this i trust  
till, nothing, remains, not, even, the pain.
Insiderew
Written by Insiderew (rew)
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Author's Note
one mustn't take self too seriously.
enclosed rhyme scheme or sandwich r.s
I had no great difficulty with this
but i thought i was doing a villanelle!
one mustn't take self too seriously.
enclosed rhyme scheme or sandwich r.s
I had no great difficulty with this
but i thought i was doing a villanelle!
but this rhyme scheme krept up on me and...
John Milton (1608 - 1674 ) sonnet vii is good example

or Wilfred Owen's (1893 - 1918) '' nothing happens ''
is an excellent example because it introduces one to para rhyme.
scary stuff lol
i had great fun writing this. sometimes i cannot believe wot i writ lol
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