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~a'waitin Pops' funeral back in th'dogdays of NCsouthernsummer hot'heat~
HE DONE STEPT BE'YOND: Thee Memorial Service
ohLordy i's crunched in dread'o thee
oldman's memorialservice a'comin th'is sattyday....
not bcause He is really finally dead so much as
all thee
sincere
shallow
heartfelt
mindless
sacred
disconscious
ceremonial
self'serving
griefy laughter sentiment[al] blather that
that that
I & We[e]
feeeeeeeel compelled & compulsed to
perform, like a comfort'food passion'play,
acting as-if'ly wee Knew thee unknowable----
Thee Gravity(in it's physical & meta4ic 'meanings')
of
My Human Behavior & Human Disnature
is gettin'mo'&more alikey to
crush
it'sSelf betwixt Now
& thee 'aftermath' of It-All.....
(all
my/our Survivals only survive butt alittle'while)
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ohLordy i's crunched in dread'o thee
oldman's memorialservice a'comin th'is sattyday....
not bcause He is really finally dead so much as
all thee
sincere
shallow
heartfelt
mindless
sacred
disconscious
ceremonial
self'serving
griefy laughter sentiment[al] blather that
that that
I & We[e]
feeeeeeeel compelled & compulsed to
perform, like a comfort'food passion'play,
acting as-if'ly wee Knew thee unknowable----
Thee Gravity(in it's physical & meta4ic 'meanings')
of
My Human Behavior & Human Disnature
is gettin'mo'&more alikey to
crush
it'sSelf betwixt Now
& thee 'aftermath' of It-All.....
(all
my/our Survivals only survive butt alittle'while)
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXdkzk23augie2011xxxxxxxxxxx
Published 30th Jan 2012
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1st Feb 2012 12:19pm
Your handling of the subject is thoughtful and interesting. Thought it would be a chore to get through the language, but to my surprise it reads naturally and in an interesting way. Original and free-thinking. I like it.
1st Feb 2012 12:55pm
thank'ye most much.....
a rarified perception of 'my' silly'serious perspective..
bless ye !
a rarified perception of 'my' silly'serious perspective..
bless ye !
