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The comet metaphor
I am
Like a comet
People like the sun
Burning me
So I'm surrounding myself
With the fumes and gases of what I perceive
I grow larger
Shine for a while
Then fade away
As I grow small and distant
And so very tired
Like a comet
People like the sun
Burning me
So I'm surrounding myself
With the fumes and gases of what I perceive
I grow larger
Shine for a while
Then fade away
As I grow small and distant
And so very tired
Published 11th Oct 2020
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26th Dec 2020 7:48pm
27th Dec 2020 6:54pm
Jez, actually...but yeah I get it and thanks for putting this on your reading list
5th Jan 2021 11:48pm
Especially like
"....surrounding myself
With the fumes and gases of what I perceive....''
right write on
"....surrounding myself
With the fumes and gases of what I perceive....''
right write on
16th Mar 2021 3:35am
16th Mar 2021 10:30am
