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Feast for Sinners
I am your confessional
Taking your sins to the food bank
Mashing them up into something delicious
Feast for the sinners who tried redemption
Realized that they weren’t really sinners
That desire comes in like the wind
You wear an extra layer
Then
March on
Taking your sins to the food bank
Mashing them up into something delicious
Feast for the sinners who tried redemption
Realized that they weren’t really sinners
That desire comes in like the wind
You wear an extra layer
Then
March on
Written by
PoetSpeak
Published 9th Oct 2020
Author's Note
Look both ways before crossing ....
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Re. Feast for Sinners
9th Oct 2020 1:40pm
“Feast for the sinners who tried redemption
Realized that they weren’t really sinners”
You have no idea how much I needed those two lines this morning. The whole thing is great, but those words are spectacular. Well done, cowboy.
Realized that they weren’t really sinners”
You have no idea how much I needed those two lines this morning. The whole thing is great, but those words are spectacular. Well done, cowboy.
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9th Oct 2020 1:50pm
I was inspired by a friend who’s been struggling with identity and life challenges. I sent this to her and then decided to post it.
It sums up a lot of us here I believe
Thanks Daisy
Appreciate the nod !!
It sums up a lot of us here I believe
Thanks Daisy
Appreciate the nod !!
Re. Feast for Sinners
9th Oct 2020 1:53pm
If being human and being programmed with desire is a sin, then the whole world is going to hell, but luckily, I don't think it is thus (or maybe it's just the freak in me).
Excellent write PoetSpeak.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Excellent write PoetSpeak.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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9th Oct 2020 1:55pm
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Re. Feast for Sinners
9th Oct 2020 2:57pm
Dear P,
Blessed relief to read this today. None of us sinners just trying to cross the finish line as best we can. Thoughtful and most encouraging! H🌷
Blessed relief to read this today. None of us sinners just trying to cross the finish line as best we can. Thoughtful and most encouraging! H🌷
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Re. Feast for Sinners
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Oct 2020 4:25pm
9th Oct 2020 4:04pm
I proudly march, snuggled within my own downy ok'd existence of sensual sin. I gladly offer up my personalized gourmet casserole of concupiscence
It's windy and I too, am hungry
🌹🙏🌹
-S
*Nominated this for Oct POtM
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11602/#501447
It's windy and I too, am hungry
🌹🙏🌹
-S
*Nominated this for Oct POtM
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11602/#501447
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Re: Re. Feast for Sinners
9th Oct 2020 4:28pm
Wow
Blown away
This one really struck a cord with the poets
Thank you Blue
Means a lot to me
🌸👍🙏🌈
Blown away
This one really struck a cord with the poets
Thank you Blue
Means a lot to me
🌸👍🙏🌈
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9th Oct 2020 5:10pm
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