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Interstellar
Published 7th Oct 2020
Author's Note
There is a reason I used 'u and i' instead of you and I, but I think it will go over the heads of most people, so I will dilvulge. Take a look at your keyboard, and perhaps you'll figure it out ;)
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7th Oct 2020 10:28pm
This is a cosmic win, NewB! The graphic is perfect, and the flow is pure poetry. Beautifully spilled 💜.
The stars are great to look at as long as you have a special someone with you.
7th Oct 2020 11:02pm
7th Oct 2020 11:59pm
"All I can is you." I remember those days, my friend. Well said.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Anonymous
- Edited 24th Dec 2020 7:45am
8th Oct 2020 00:46am
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this one made my heart of hearts palpitate
a genuine rush of sorts. But, well wow, you took
me to an unconventional time in a non-judgemental
space. Seems like yesterday, yet, moments I'll
never have again.
A soft head nod, to you.
a genuine rush of sorts. But, well wow, you took
me to an unconventional time in a non-judgemental
space. Seems like yesterday, yet, moments I'll
never have again.
A soft head nod, to you.
8th Oct 2020 1:25am
8th Oct 2020 2:48am
Dear NB,
Omg! Sooooo lucky I figured the u and I out, or emergency flares would have been sent up for help and explanation.
U and I are always together. Just like the love we all can share being under the same stars.
This is a stunning poem that transcends. My words are trite trying to compliment a gorgeous write. Bravo. H🌷
Omg! Sooooo lucky I figured the u and I out, or emergency flares would have been sent up for help and explanation.
U and I are always together. Just like the love we all can share being under the same stars.
This is a stunning poem that transcends. My words are trite trying to compliment a gorgeous write. Bravo. H🌷
8th Oct 2020 3:02am
Sigh... it's when I read something like this that I have to confess I'm just a mushy romantic at heart. So lovely. ❤
8th Oct 2020 3:40am
Them vowels like to stick together...
I like that it effectively...supports the mood so well... Ely
I like that it effectively...supports the mood so well... Ely
8th Oct 2020 5:54am
Stunning write NB. Again, this new format you've taken on is really bringing forth some beautiful work.
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