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i love your middle
i love your middle
home of your soul
where tingles flow
and fingers touch then go below
rise up spread
middle meet me
take my tongue
flutter clit it shivers
spines flow with drunken rivers
absorbed deeply
in the body of another
raw and deliberate
hands pressed to breasts
to possess and be possessed
home of your soul
where tingles flow
and fingers touch then go below
rise up spread
middle meet me
take my tongue
flutter clit it shivers
spines flow with drunken rivers
absorbed deeply
in the body of another
raw and deliberate
hands pressed to breasts
to possess and be possessed
Published 4th Oct 2020
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It all started in the middle.
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2020 9:02pm
I always find it incredibly difficult to comment on poems with honest critique as their default. I'm surely not smart enough to pick apart your spill technically, nor would I even want to of I could. So, forgive me if this isn't the kind of feedback you're looking for...
I thoroughly enjoyed your ability to convey the sensual desire you feel. The line "spines flow with drunken rivers" grabbed me and I actually went back and reread it again because of it.
To me, that's the sign of a well written poem. One that elicits a response like the one I had and captures the reader's desired whimsy
💜 💜 💜
🌠
xoxo
B
I thoroughly enjoyed your ability to convey the sensual desire you feel. The line "spines flow with drunken rivers" grabbed me and I actually went back and reread it again because of it.
To me, that's the sign of a well written poem. One that elicits a response like the one I had and captures the reader's desired whimsy
💜 💜 💜
🌠
xoxo
B
4th Oct 2020 10:45pm
I appreciate your comment and value your opinion, having read several of your excellent pieces.
5th Oct 2020 1:51am
