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“So What’s Coming Next ?” ... A Poem written by Big Virge 2/8/2020
So What’s Coming Next ... ?
Now That The PRESIDENT ...
Has Caught This VIRUS ... ?!?
Will The Don’ End Up Dead ... ?
Or Will This Put An End ...
To His Reign of MADNESS ... ?!?
Or ... Will This Now Bring ...
A World of NEW STINGS ...
With ... Political Links ...
From Names Like Mike Pence ...
Or BIDEN To TIGHTEN ...
... Human Existence ... ?!?
It’s A Future UNCERTAIN ...
WITHOUT Iron Curtains ... !!!
But Are Those Words TRUE ... ?
Cos' Who Now Has A Clue ... !?!
of Who NOW ...
CONTROLS WHO ... ?!?
Because It’s DISPUTED ... !!!
That ... Vladimir Putin ...
Is Moving And Pulling ...
The Strings of These Muppets ...
... Political Puppets ... !!!
When It Comes To Selecting ...
Whose Winning Elections ...
It Seems That Infections ...
Are Being Directed ...
To Money Collections ...
of Cash For Protection ...
From New Age Recessions ...
And What Is ...
... Coming NEXT ... !!!
Like ... Traffic Directives ...
Where Roads Have ONE Entrance ... !?!
And Yes Just Like BREXIT' ...
Have ... Only ONE Exit ... !!!
To HINDER Collectives ...
From Using Back Streets ...
NO More Moving Freely ...
Conspiracy Or ... Theory ... ?!?
Well It Now Seems To Me ...
That Stopping This Disease ...
Is NOT PRIORITISED ...
Like Pandemics Should Be ... !!!
Could It Be One BIG LIE ...
To Gain ... DOMINANCY ...
of ALL HUMANITY ...
So That TECHNOLOGY ...
Can Replace Human Beings ... ?
Or Is That ... FALLACY ... ?!?
A Nightmare Or Dream ...
Or Simply ... POETRY ... !?!
That’s Asking Some Questions ...
About Where We’re Heading ...
Cos' It’s All So CRAZY ... !!!
That People Now Seem ...
UNWILLING To Stand ...
And ... REJECT Policies ...
That Will Now Leave Humans ...
Being Tracked CONSTANTLY ... !?!
What’s NEXT May Just See ...
A Breed That’s So WEAK ...
That They No Longer Seek ...
To REJECT Being Meek ...
And CONTROLLED By Money ... !!!
It’s A SAD Thing To See ... !!!
How The Rise of CORONA ...
Has Hit Folks Like Boulders ...
Thrown By Thanos’s Soldiers ... !!!
It Seems Minds Are In Comas ...
And Are No Longer BOLDER ...
Than Type Faces Seen ...
That Feed Internet Screens ...
While Corona Has BREACHED ...
The ... WHITEHOUSE To Be ... !!!!!!
A THREAT To America’s SECURITY ... !!!
While It Seems The Chinese ...
Want Taxis ... DRIVERLESS ...
It’s A World of Progress ...
Or Something SUSPECT ...
That HASN’T COME YET ... !!!
Which Now Begs The Question ...
“So What’s Coming Next ?”
Now That The PRESIDENT ...
Has Caught This VIRUS ... ?!?
Will The Don’ End Up Dead ... ?
Or Will This Put An End ...
To His Reign of MADNESS ... ?!?
Or ... Will This Now Bring ...
A World of NEW STINGS ...
With ... Political Links ...
From Names Like Mike Pence ...
Or BIDEN To TIGHTEN ...
... Human Existence ... ?!?
It’s A Future UNCERTAIN ...
WITHOUT Iron Curtains ... !!!
But Are Those Words TRUE ... ?
Cos' Who Now Has A Clue ... !?!
of Who NOW ...
CONTROLS WHO ... ?!?
Because It’s DISPUTED ... !!!
That ... Vladimir Putin ...
Is Moving And Pulling ...
The Strings of These Muppets ...
... Political Puppets ... !!!
When It Comes To Selecting ...
Whose Winning Elections ...
It Seems That Infections ...
Are Being Directed ...
To Money Collections ...
of Cash For Protection ...
From New Age Recessions ...
And What Is ...
... Coming NEXT ... !!!
Like ... Traffic Directives ...
Where Roads Have ONE Entrance ... !?!
And Yes Just Like BREXIT' ...
Have ... Only ONE Exit ... !!!
To HINDER Collectives ...
From Using Back Streets ...
NO More Moving Freely ...
Conspiracy Or ... Theory ... ?!?
Well It Now Seems To Me ...
That Stopping This Disease ...
Is NOT PRIORITISED ...
Like Pandemics Should Be ... !!!
Could It Be One BIG LIE ...
To Gain ... DOMINANCY ...
of ALL HUMANITY ...
So That TECHNOLOGY ...
Can Replace Human Beings ... ?
Or Is That ... FALLACY ... ?!?
A Nightmare Or Dream ...
Or Simply ... POETRY ... !?!
That’s Asking Some Questions ...
About Where We’re Heading ...
Cos' It’s All So CRAZY ... !!!
That People Now Seem ...
UNWILLING To Stand ...
And ... REJECT Policies ...
That Will Now Leave Humans ...
Being Tracked CONSTANTLY ... !?!
What’s NEXT May Just See ...
A Breed That’s So WEAK ...
That They No Longer Seek ...
To REJECT Being Meek ...
And CONTROLLED By Money ... !!!
It’s A SAD Thing To See ... !!!
How The Rise of CORONA ...
Has Hit Folks Like Boulders ...
Thrown By Thanos’s Soldiers ... !!!
It Seems Minds Are In Comas ...
And Are No Longer BOLDER ...
Than Type Faces Seen ...
That Feed Internet Screens ...
While Corona Has BREACHED ...
The ... WHITEHOUSE To Be ... !!!!!!
A THREAT To America’s SECURITY ... !!!
While It Seems The Chinese ...
Want Taxis ... DRIVERLESS ...
It’s A World of Progress ...
Or Something SUSPECT ...
That HASN’T COME YET ... !!!
Which Now Begs The Question ...
“So What’s Coming Next ?”
Published 3rd Oct 2020
Author's Note
Not a bad question to pose right now....
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Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
In classical rhetoric and logic,
BEGGING THE QUESTION is an informal fallacy
that occurs when an argument's premises assume
the truth of the conclusion, instead of supporting it.
It is a type of circular reasoning: an argument
that requires that the desired conclusion be true.
This often occurs in an indirect way
such that the fallacy's presence is hidden,
or at least not easily apparent.
In modern vernacular usage, however,
BEGGING THE QUESTION is often
incorrectly used to mean
"raising the question" or
"suggesting the question".
Sometimes it is even
confused with "dodging the question",
an attempt to avoid it.
BEGGING THE QUESTION is an informal fallacy
that occurs when an argument's premises assume
the truth of the conclusion, instead of supporting it.
It is a type of circular reasoning: an argument
that requires that the desired conclusion be true.
This often occurs in an indirect way
such that the fallacy's presence is hidden,
or at least not easily apparent.
In modern vernacular usage, however,
BEGGING THE QUESTION is often
incorrectly used to mean
"raising the question" or
"suggesting the question".
Sometimes it is even
confused with "dodging the question",
an attempt to avoid it.
Well A.R.
I speak for myself, and in straight forward vernacular, not fallacies.
So, in this case, the words mean exactly what the words say.
Nice1
Big Virge
I speak for myself, and in straight forward vernacular, not fallacies.
So, in this case, the words mean exactly what the words say.
Nice1
Big Virge
That's the issue with it.
The straight forward vernacular is wrong.
In the sixties and seventies, when
some people mispronounced, "nucular",
instead of "nuclear", were they correct,
or were they incorrect? Does misuse
become proper use just because
everyone is doing it?
It begs the question doesn't it?
Well, does it beg the question, or doesn't it?
The purpose of honest critique is to help growth.
Understanding this can help you write
better poetry in the future...
because the future comes next
and next comes later,
and later poetry is better understood.
The straight forward vernacular is wrong.
In the sixties and seventies, when
some people mispronounced, "nucular",
instead of "nuclear", were they correct,
or were they incorrect? Does misuse
become proper use just because
everyone is doing it?
It begs the question doesn't it?
Well, does it beg the question, or doesn't it?
The purpose of honest critique is to help growth.
Understanding this can help you write
better poetry in the future...
because the future comes next
and next comes later,
and later poetry is better understood.
Thanks for sharing your opinion, it is noted, but as said, I don't agree.
If it's wrong, for whatever reason, so be it, but I know what I mean.
and how it should be said, as it's flow would not be the same in a spoken word performance, with the appropriate wording. as it's meant to be a spoken word poem.
Moreover, the content of the poem is more important to me, than what clearly is to you, which is totally cool.
Thanks again.
Virgil
If it's wrong, for whatever reason, so be it, but I know what I mean.
and how it should be said, as it's flow would not be the same in a spoken word performance, with the appropriate wording. as it's meant to be a spoken word poem.
Moreover, the content of the poem is more important to me, than what clearly is to you, which is totally cool.
Thanks again.
Virgil
3rd Oct 2020 6:11am
I agree with you, content is the most important part.
I could have critiqued more into your word usage,
but at a point it interferes with my own art.
I like your tenacity, and you deliver with ferocity,
but your direction and visage need a jump start.
You definitely have enough heart, but when it's said aloud
(spoken word poem or not), with the right words, it can sound
a whole lot better than what you've currently got.
I could have critiqued more into your word usage,
but at a point it interferes with my own art.
I like your tenacity, and you deliver with ferocity,
but your direction and visage need a jump start.
You definitely have enough heart, but when it's said aloud
(spoken word poem or not), with the right words, it can sound
a whole lot better than what you've currently got.
