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Mm.. Little Butter Rum
I do love how you love my butter rum
Letting it run down you chin and then then some
Make you moan make you scream
Letting it run down you chin and then then some
Make you moan make you scream
Published 2nd Oct 2020
| Edited 24th Nov 2023
Author's Note
Someone special was reading this on my memory stick while I was doing my homework .. and begged me to resubmit this so he can read it on his cell phone.. for a creative juice flow... you not right my love, but here you are... blow that sax... and keep it hard for me .... always my love... wink
SKC.. you got me straight blushing ... 😘
SKC.. you got me straight blushing ... 😘
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2nd Oct 2020 2:14am
wow this Wolf is on your trail you have been so nice and sweet to pay the toll so Little Butter Rum came and stay do not go your basket of goodies are the sweets and outch that broken lim stuck me in the back once angain
sweet sensual lines upon your canvas
sweet sensual lines upon your canvas
2nd Oct 2020 2:25am
Oh my love that was .. such a heart weakening comment.. this Queen truly felt... Much love to you for taking the time to read ... mmm, as I say you can taste the rainbow. Please enjoy your evening and a beautiful TGIF I am wishing you ....😊
2nd Oct 2020 2:29am
thank you love for te sweet comment and back at you come over we chat over old times
2nd Oct 2020 2:31am
2nd Oct 2020 2:38am
This wolf is howling for you mean that in a good way, great hot poem. Keep on writing my Erotic Queen.
2nd Oct 2020 2:43am
Mm.. is that the beautiful sounds outside my window I hear resonating deep in the woods my handsome poet🐾🐾
2nd Oct 2020 2:45am
2nd Oct 2020 2:47am
You are... something special... mmm... should I run or allow you to raid my goodie basket... my handsome poet...lol😛
2nd Oct 2020 2:50am
Yes my Erotic Queen I'm special to you and I will treat with kindness and respect.
2nd Oct 2020 2:54am
I need more conniving than that... I live by the good deeds not by words.... You are my handsome poet, my knight... now prove yourself... and I have already mental been all over that muscular body...wink
2nd Oct 2020 2:58am
Now your whole body need some loving, so I got whipped cream, chocolate syrup, and cherries ready to places everywhere on your insane hot my Erotic Queen, MM MM MM MMM you taste so damn good.
2nd Oct 2020 3:01am
I am still thinking about the worth of that beautiful serenade my handsome poet...very smooth if I am allowed to say
2nd Oct 2020 3:03am
Yes my Erotic Queen, I will sernade you all night if that's what brings you pleasure.
2nd Oct 2020 2:38am
2nd Oct 2020 2:40am
Why thank you my poet..it has..and do enjoy the metal eyes tease at hand
2nd Oct 2020 3:14am
this I say once you have found this wolf in the woods he shall not leave your side till the end of time
2nd Oct 2020 3:27am
Mm.. can I have that is writing my friend ... and thank you for such a beautiful thought
2nd Oct 2020 3:35am
that you can in any way you like be pen pencell or engrave in gold, silver, or platinum your chose
2nd Oct 2020 3:38am
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3rd Oct 2020 1:50am
4th Oct 2020 2:42am
Well hello there my poetess, and thank you for taking the time to grace my canvass and adding such a feverish comment. I will pay homage to your page and scribble my poetic serenade as time will allow... I am wishing you a great evening and a pleasant Sunday in the making, in addition, welcome to DUP as well
