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Dilemma Of Man
'...Surely there are men who have made their art
out of no tragic war ...
Those men that in their writings are most wise
own nothing but their blind, stupified hearts'.
-William Butler Yeats
A man had walked within a creed
Holding hands as mercy bled;
Every known within a seed
Unshelled as such to earthen bed.
Sweet within his concept lie
Her temperaments for his reply;
A man removed from sustenance
Is never brought from countenance.
Timorous, that chaff of reed
That any man undone could bleed;
To lift a voice as soft as Eve's
And wanton, fall upon his knees.
But greater things beyond him lie
Within the air of fairest sky;
And to his will they too must die
Wherein lives his future bride.
So, to measure by his rule
Surly ways begotten of fools;
A fool in love is greater than
What monument is God in man.
.....
out of no tragic war ...
Those men that in their writings are most wise
own nothing but their blind, stupified hearts'.
-William Butler Yeats
A man had walked within a creed
Holding hands as mercy bled;
Every known within a seed
Unshelled as such to earthen bed.
Sweet within his concept lie
Her temperaments for his reply;
A man removed from sustenance
Is never brought from countenance.
Timorous, that chaff of reed
That any man undone could bleed;
To lift a voice as soft as Eve's
And wanton, fall upon his knees.
But greater things beyond him lie
Within the air of fairest sky;
And to his will they too must die
Wherein lives his future bride.
So, to measure by his rule
Surly ways begotten of fools;
A fool in love is greater than
What monument is God in man.
.....
Written by
PoetsRevenge
Published 30th Sep 2020
| Edited 3rd Oct 2020
Author's Note
Inspired by 'Meru' by William Butler Yeats, written for the 'The Centre Cannot Hold' comp.
Quoted lines are from 'Ego Dominus Tuus'
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/browse?contentId=20685
Quoted lines are from 'Ego Dominus Tuus'
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/browse?contentId=20685
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Re. Dilemna Of Man
30th Sep 2020 6:30am
Yeah i agree mer is kinda mean and rude. .shes gonna be one bitter old broad
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Re: Re. Dilemna Of Man
1st Oct 2020 4:54am
Lol, Yeats courted the same woman for years and was rejected, remaining childless. I guess I channeled some of his frustration into this :)
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Re: Re. Dilemna Of Man
1st Oct 2020 4:58am
Thanks so much, thats a great observation of Yeats' intricate tapestries as well :)
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Thank you for your continued participation, PR. We're sliding into homeplate with about 24 hours to go and you continue to bring your major league A game.
I personally find your chosen inspiration "Meru" by Yeats an interesting albeit odd poem. It's titled "Meru", but it also mentions Everest with equal emphasis. Lines 10,11, & 12 also come across as indecisive. There is an intriguing emphasis on saying an additional goodbye to Rome, yet no apparent reason why it differed from Greece and Egypt.
The ending stanza somewhat suggests that these ciilizations were each undone in a single day, as if in sarcastic contrast to the phrase "Rome wasn't built in a day."
I personally find your chosen inspiration "Meru" by Yeats an interesting albeit odd poem. It's titled "Meru", but it also mentions Everest with equal emphasis. Lines 10,11, & 12 also come across as indecisive. There is an intriguing emphasis on saying an additional goodbye to Rome, yet no apparent reason why it differed from Greece and Egypt.
The ending stanza somewhat suggests that these ciilizations were each undone in a single day, as if in sarcastic contrast to the phrase "Rome wasn't built in a day."
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Re: Re. Dilemna Of Man
1st Oct 2020 5:10am
I'm finding that Yeats had a sense of humor, at times sarcastic in his tales written as poems. He seemed to poke fun at intellectualism, and the second line I quoted may, unfortunately be directed at T.S. Elliot, whose work he wasn't fond of. He seemed to put the art of a poem often above meaning, or equal weight at least. I found Meru to be whimsical, as well, full of odd commentary. I like your interpretation of his ending, the significance of a single day, or the irony. Thanks so much for the encouragement :)
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th Sep 2020 10:10pm
30th Sep 2020 10:07pm
utterly stunning.....each line is a moment to be held, as should be. in awe.
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7th Oct 2020 4:43am
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1st Oct 2020 2:06am
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3rd Oct 2020 6:20am
Yeats' work, like many classics from that time was full of portending and admonishing of man with older wisdoms, I'm glad this came through as haunting. Though it wasn't meant to be as haunting as say, Poe, but a bit lighter. I'm glad it was gorgeous, too, as Yeats was so artful. thanks so much for the comment, friend :)💕
Re: Re. Dilemna Of Man
6th Oct 2020 7:39pm
You capture the essence of the classics in these tribute pieces so much it is like you channel their spirits. It's always a beauty to behold.
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7th Oct 2020 4:41am
I definitely feel like Im doing that and it feels so cool to do it, sometimes I don t know where the words come from. Although, I wonder at times if I am like Mary Oliver's ' Mockingbird' who sings everyone elses song so eloquently yet struggles to sing its own. But as long as it comes out beautiful I'm happy with it and it is part of a learning process. :)💕
Re. Dilemna Of Man
1st Oct 2020 8:55am
My word you have been doing your homework I am sure it will pay dividends : slip
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3rd Oct 2020 6:07am
Ah, but it is quite the dilemma that the dividends can't be measured by man's rule, the monument is within even for fools in love with poetry :) Thanks for the witty comment :)