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FLOW

You are the river
I dip my oars into

~Deceptively placid~

Your rapids
Reward me

Written by SatInUGal

(Kumar)

Published 27th Sep 2020

#river

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Re. FLOW

27th Sep 2020 9:41am

and so they should - smiles

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27th Sep 2020 6:23pm

Smiles and wide eyes

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Re. FLOW

27th Sep 2020 1:31pm

And it has rhyme!

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27th Sep 2020 6:22pm

My favorite kind

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Re. FLOW

28th Sep 2020 00:23am

It's always nice to start off in calm waters first. Nice metaphor, Kumar.

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28th Sep 2020 00:57am

Thanks A. ;-)

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