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Light but dark
The morning sun
Was shining
Hope it would bring
To most
But not to the corpse
There in the ditch
Laying.
Was shining
Hope it would bring
To most
But not to the corpse
There in the ditch
Laying.
Published 26th Sep 2020
| Edited 27th Sep 2020
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- Edited 26th Sep 2020 11:38pm
26th Sep 2020 11:28pm
half empty
half full
sometimes it's just empty
or needs filling altogether
Ty
🙏 🌹
half full
sometimes it's just empty
or needs filling altogether
Ty
🙏 🌹
26th Sep 2020 11:30pm
27th Sep 2020 1:35am
27th Sep 2020 1:42am
27th Sep 2020 6:25pm
Depends of whether you're the corpse or the person looking at the corpse.
regards,
buddhakitty.
regards,
buddhakitty.
27th Sep 2020 6:32pm
True. But then if you are the corpse I should think your spirit is long gone. Many thanks for the comments, Regards, Robert.
28th Sep 2020 1:16am
28th Sep 2020 1:19am
Of course. And , per you, and with respect, what does the corpse see....or what is his (or her) reaction?........and coming from where?
28th Sep 2020 1:22am
The corpse sees nothing, I suppose. Darkness? But the world sees that it just wasn't his day .
28th Sep 2020 1:25am
That is a very large interpretation of darkness.......or whatever unknown forces.
