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Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.07 — For Sale by Auction
Modest star on desirable edge of Milky Way Galaxy.
Comes with eight main & five dwarf planets, boasting 184 moons,
plus numerous asteroid outbuildings. Sitting tenants on Planet-3, Earth —
currently in lock- and melt-down. Ripe for redevelopment,
(subject to the usual planning perditions). Apply: Stratos & Suns.
Comes with eight main & five dwarf planets, boasting 184 moons,
plus numerous asteroid outbuildings. Sitting tenants on Planet-3, Earth —
currently in lock- and melt-down. Ripe for redevelopment,
(subject to the usual planning perditions). Apply: Stratos & Suns.
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 26th Sep 2020
| Edited 10th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Gogyoshi Poem Nr.06 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/394500-gogyoshi-poem-nr-06-a-drop-of-logic/
Gogyoshi Poem Nr.08 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/407514-gogyoshi-poem-nr-08-stockholm-syndrome/
(photo credit: david-monje-77AW8rM9KGg-unsplash)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/394500-gogyoshi-poem-nr-06-a-drop-of-logic/
Gogyoshi Poem Nr.08 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/407514-gogyoshi-poem-nr-08-stockholm-syndrome/
(photo credit: david-monje-77AW8rM9KGg-unsplash)
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Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
26th Sep 2020 10:27pm
Dear J,
Fabulous write! This has blown the clever status to smithereens. I hope you get your asking price.
H🌷
Fabulous write! This has blown the clever status to smithereens. I hope you get your asking price.
H🌷
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
28th Sep 2020 7:56pm
Thank you H, a little trifle before breakfast the other day (hmmm). I'm not sure how I am going to follow it up now 😀. RL 🙏.
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
26th Sep 2020 11:16pm
Let's leave it alone. We would only mess it up.
Fun write.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Fun write.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
28th Sep 2020 7:59pm
Thank you BK. It's what they say I think if you're looking to join the 'perfect community' - don't, you'd only mess it up. Well, remember how 'Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy' started (Earth obliterated to make way for an interstellat bypass) ..., you never know.
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
27th Sep 2020 4:34am
Should probably evict the tenants; they're trashing the place and refuse to pay rent.
Bravo!
Bravo!
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
28th Sep 2020 8:00pm
Good point BT, thank you for that. Rent arrears is only sustainable for a certain amount of time ... and then the bailiffs come in.
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
27th Sep 2020 9:39am
Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
28th Sep 2020 8:04pm
Thank you Harry. I don't want to be a pessimist but to me it looks set to get worse before turning some kind of corner with a more awake realisation. I'm working on living life on my own terms, whatever external conditions are foisted upon us - and I'm taking Viktor Frankel's 'Man's Search for Meaning' as my guide.
Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
29th Sep 2020 5:29am
Yes I live my Zen path and always hold dear...If you understand, then everything is exactly the way it is. If you do not understand, everything is still the way it is. Stay well Josh.
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Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
Anonymous
27th Sep 2020 1:35pm
I'm SOLD! The laugh value of Uranus alone is bound to triple in worth.
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
28th Sep 2020 8:06pm
It's always useful to have something extra up your sleeve during negotiations. RL 🙏
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
28th Sep 2020 1:44am
Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
28th Sep 2020 8:16pm
I think I'm having an 'alien perspective' these last couple of weeks. Glad you liked it.
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
28th Sep 2020 7:51pm
I think I'll pass on this little piece of real estate... Enjoyed this lighthearted little poem, Josh 🙏. Perhaps the aliens are interested lol
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
28th Sep 2020 8:20pm
I can tell you anything over one hectare is too much like hard work if you do it all yourself with hand-tools. It would be a brave alien to take on such a restoration project in our neck of the galaxy. Mind you, at the moment it feels like an alien fox is running riot in the hen-house. And thank you for the RL. Cheers, Josh.
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
30th Sep 2020 1:09am
Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
30th Sep 2020 7:19pm
Thank you Robert, but no-one said it would be easy -- on the other hand maybe buyers are already here; they're just on a different part of the electro-magnetic spectrum that we humans can't yet perceive. We can tune into less than 1% of it.
Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
30th Sep 2020 7:22pm
Excellent observation. We'll send a message to Captain Kirk.........see if he has anything on his radar.
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Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.08 — For Sale by Auction
30th Sep 2020 1:18pm
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30th Sep 2020 7:20pm