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9/26/20
Stroke after stroke
It burns
I knew
It would
But still
Stroke after stroke
It burns
It burns
I knew
It would
But still
Stroke after stroke
It burns
Published 26th Sep 2020
| Edited 28th Sep 2020
Author's Note
This is technically a poem about rowing, but I like how it can apply to many things and though I’m not sure it’s a poem, I think that is what makes it a poem
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26th Sep 2020 9:15pm
I enjoy open-ended poetry such as this, which allows the reader to interpret via their own personal filter.
26th Sep 2020 10:17pm
I usually like to tie loose ends, but mystery is a lovely taste, once acquired.
26th Sep 2020 10:18pm
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