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Mo(u)rning Ritual
Published 25th Sep 2020
Author's Note
Attempting something different... Not as much rhyming or structure. Visual aesthetic inspired by nomoth's incredible visual entries.
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Anonymous
25th Sep 2020 7:43pm
I love old nature illustrations, this with that faded ochre feel, that feel of self steeped under the morning weight.
wishing you well as always, beautifully written, love the visual.
wishing you well as always, beautifully written, love the visual.
25th Sep 2020 8:35pm
25th Sep 2020 9:30pm
25th Sep 2020 11:04pm
Great spill and great visual presentation as well NB
BRAVO all around my friend
BRAVO all around my friend
26th Sep 2020 1:00am
Dear NB,
There is such an aching solitude and reverence throughout this piece I can align myself beside. The second stanza speaks volumes to the ennui of another day with no spiritual changes for the soul. The visual used is absolutely stunning. Beautiful piece. H🌷
There is such an aching solitude and reverence throughout this piece I can align myself beside. The second stanza speaks volumes to the ennui of another day with no spiritual changes for the soul. The visual used is absolutely stunning. Beautiful piece. H🌷
26th Sep 2020 1:20am
26th Sep 2020 3:44pm
26th Sep 2020 9:03pm
Love the flow and how elegant each stanza is constructed...
The visual is amazing...
Great one
The visual is amazing...
Great one
27th Sep 2020 00:39am
Hey NewB........this is dynamic in every way........luv the pic......,luv the thought provoking words.......RL for me........different is great........so is the norm.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
27th Sep 2020 9:24am
There is not much I can say NB...this is truly a well crafted poem of the highest order...the melancholia and loneliness just oozes from each line. Bravo my friend!!!
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
28th Sep 2020 3:51am
1st Oct 2020 3:21am
3rd Oct 2020 11:44pm
Dear NB, this is a stunning and strong piece. By the look of comments and RLs, you can see how much this is appreciated in this community. It's truly wonderful. I'm glad you are trying out new things.
Bravo.
Bravo.
