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the vastness
I call to the inky blackness of space
through time and wormholes, I send tendrils
infinite time watches
recording the happenings
space is alive with feeling
endless eyes to see is the vastness
the stars look on in innocence
in violence galaxies collide
a consummation of sorts
new stars are born from them
time wrinkles and expands
walking through history
we are able to gain knowledge
entering into a sacred oath with the cosmos
to intervene on the behalf of the species
such a delicate balance
a ballet in the heavens
we are responsible for our actions
tiny ripples make large distortions
be careful what you wish for the universe is listening
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Re. the vastness
24th Sep 2020 6:01pm
For every action there is a reaction
A flap of a butterflies wing is the start of a hurricane a million miles away. Be mindful of ones actions
Love this
Love and light
Ron xx
A flap of a butterflies wing is the start of a hurricane a million miles away. Be mindful of ones actions
Love this
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. the vastness
25th Sep 2020 2:33am
good evening dearest Ron thank you for reading and sharing your insight here I deeply appreciate you 🌹
Re. the vastness
24th Sep 2020 6:05pm
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25th Sep 2020 2:34am
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Anonymous
24th Sep 2020 9:35pm
your words always move and evoke something inside. Ty for your offering
🙏 🌹 💜
xo
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🙏 🌹 💜
xo
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Re: Re. the vastness
25th Sep 2020 2:34am
thank you graciously beautiful Blue for the love on this write I deeply cherish you 🌹
Re. the vastness
24th Sep 2020 9:53pm
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25th Sep 2020 2:35am
aw thank you beautiful Kristina that's such beautifully generous thing to say I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
Re. the vastness
25th Sep 2020 2:53am
It's one of the reasons why I enjoy astronomy so much, the universe is a mystery, slowly revealing little secrets here and there. Your piece is a reminder of that, it's recording everything.
Excellent write Brenda.
Excellent write Brenda.
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Re: Re. the vastness
3rd Oct 2020 11:02pm
thank you dearest Wally I love space though I've never studied astronomy there's a great many things I would study if I could maintain focus but alas it's not to be at the moment...yes the universe is keeping record I love that you got that ❤
Re. the vastness
26th Sep 2020 12:08pm
I like your poem. It personifies the universe, and gives it the characteristic of begetting children, new stars. It makes it the writer of history, the observer of man's actions and the detector of everything. We should beware of it. Lovely.
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Re: Re. the vastness
3rd Oct 2020 11:03pm
thank you graciously dearest Joseph yes space is most definately alive and aware I believe I'm happy this spoke to you 💕
Re. the vastness
28th Sep 2020 1:07am
That was awesome, Brenda 🙏❤️
One of my favorites of yours... So beautiful and deep. Really appeals to my love for space and the universe
One of my favorites of yours... So beautiful and deep. Really appeals to my love for space and the universe
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Re: Re. the vastness
3rd Oct 2020 11:04pm
thank you dearest NewB for such an awesome comment I truly appreciate your thoughts I love space it's endless 💕