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Along The Highway
No one here to read me
perhaps a junior journalist
just darkness, worms
and a charioteer to Hades
Reaching out for me
with antiquated arrows
of empty quivers
in my lonesome bellows
For my god has wed the night
in shadows of my obscurity
dripping marrow of my ink
along the hyperlink highway
perhaps a junior journalist
just darkness, worms
and a charioteer to Hades
Reaching out for me
with antiquated arrows
of empty quivers
in my lonesome bellows
For my god has wed the night
in shadows of my obscurity
dripping marrow of my ink
along the hyperlink highway
Published 24th Sep 2020
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24th Sep 2020 3:53pm
good morning dearest Adagio
this is darkly beautiful...
I'm listening to some dark music
I find it relaxing...
see what you think if you feel like it...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=buMMbq23wqQ
p.s I think your readership will go up
just a feeling...
this is darkly beautiful...
I'm listening to some dark music
I find it relaxing...
see what you think if you feel like it...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=buMMbq23wqQ
p.s I think your readership will go up
just a feeling...
24th Sep 2020 4:04pm
Good morning. In all honesty, I have written better. I value my better scribblings. I watched the video and like it. In Darkness and death, there is honesty. I need to stick with what I do best...undecided at this time.
24th Sep 2020 9:17pm
No ONE??
i think not!
Your readership has improved at least by 65% since i've shared Your ink with others who follow my ink.
Just because they don't comment doesn't mean they don't have anything to say............
it may mean they are not as into the " what-ifs " and spiritual and philosophical ink as You and me.
Trust me,
they are reading and thinking and dreaming and pondering.
Here You spill just another example of what causes readers (writers and readers, alike) to think about the ink...............later
i think not!
Your readership has improved at least by 65% since i've shared Your ink with others who follow my ink.
Just because they don't comment doesn't mean they don't have anything to say............
it may mean they are not as into the " what-ifs " and spiritual and philosophical ink as You and me.
Trust me,
they are reading and thinking and dreaming and pondering.
Here You spill just another example of what causes readers (writers and readers, alike) to think about the ink...............later
24th Sep 2020 9:26pm
My mind is in motion when I create a first line. Often erasing and starting over.
