deepundergroundpoetry.com

the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
flutter beautiful butterfly
as silken wings take flight
on the winds of change
rise
formed of air
soft and reflective
pure of soul
utterly perfect
imperfections are seen as flaws
lovely one not in my eyes
they make you shine
I'm singing you a song through the universes
connect with the elements
the earth trembles with the love of you
fire doesn't scorch it warms
the oceans vast a bed for your pneuma
be comforted by the breeze
as it caresses your brow
can you feel me near you?
take a breath and release
then sigh it will be alright
little one so graceful in her flight
tenderness becomes you
it's been a long journey
becoming who you are
Author's Note
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Ek9n7B14w8
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 13
reading list entries 5
comments 35
reads 775
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 3:12pm
The journey of transformation, often long, hard but if you are lucky ultimately worth the journey. The path is often full of twists turns and diversions but stay on your path, and learn to love the beautiful Butterfly you've become
Love abd light sent on gossamer wings
Ron xx
Love abd light sent on gossamer wings
Ron xx
1

Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 3:15pm
good morning dearest Ron thank you my dear friend for your beautiful insight I so appreciate the love you show me ❤
Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 3:16pm
Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 3:18pm
love and light dearest Ron...
here's a song for you today if you choose to listen...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KTmatjyd4KM
here's a song for you today if you choose to listen...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KTmatjyd4KM
Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 3:29pm
Such a haunting song i see its a lullaby i didnt understand the words but the video was amazing beautiful scenery the wolf was awesome and she was beautiful too.
Ive been watching VIKINGS on amazon and this seriously stirred the RAGNOR RON in me lol
Thank you it was awesome
Love and light
Ron xx
Ive been watching VIKINGS on amazon and this seriously stirred the RAGNOR RON in me lol
Thank you it was awesome
Love and light
Ron xx
1

Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 3:22pm
I think I love the above conversation as much as B's write! (which is truly lovely, btw)
I feel the 😍 today!
(group hug)
Awww
😉 😉 😉
💜
Ty for sharing
xoxo 💋
🌹
B
I feel the 😍 today!
(group hug)
Awww
😉 😉 😉
💜
Ty for sharing
xoxo 💋
🌹
B
1

Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 3:27pm
good morning beautiful Blue thank you...you gifted me smiles today... hugs you tightly...
if you don't mind darkness here's what I'm listening to at the moment...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gpo-rrvgPGI
have a beautiful day today 🌹
if you don't mind darkness here's what I'm listening to at the moment...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gpo-rrvgPGI
have a beautiful day today 🌹
Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 3:34pm
Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 3:34pm
Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 3:37pm
Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
Anonymous
24th Sep 2020 3:31pm
👏🏾👏🏾 Be safe & Be Blessed🙏🏾😷😷👼🏾

1

Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 3:40pm
Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 3:50pm
good morning beautiful Neoma
I'm so happy you liked my humble offering to you 🌹
I'm so happy you liked my humble offering to you 🌹
Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 3:54pm
Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 4:21pm
Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 4:51pm
Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 7:26pm
You, sweet sister are the example of perfect agape love
Beautiful piece
Beautiful piece
1

Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 7:28pm
Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
Anonymous
24th Sep 2020 9:07pm
Here's a couple of triangles, for you, Valeriya
·.· .·.
·.· .·.

1

Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 9:46pm
Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 9:00pm
You Honor and Bless and Praise our Strong Beautiful Spirit
so masterfully..........
Wonderful tribute
so masterfully..........
Wonderful tribute
1

Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 9:53pm
thank you graciously dearest Tallen she is such a kind spirit...I'm happy this spoke to you another kind soul 💕
Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
Anonymous
24th Sep 2020 9:05pm
And here's my song, for you
https://youtu.be/2Hc36EBCoCI
It sounds dark but there's a beautiful conclusion
https://youtu.be/2Hc36EBCoCI
It sounds dark but there's a beautiful conclusion

1

Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
24th Sep 2020 10:19pm
thank you beautiful Emily here's one for you...
https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=into+dust+mazzy+star
I loved your song...
https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=into+dust+mazzy+star
I loved your song...
Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
25th Sep 2020 3:09am
Dear B,
Oh what a better place the world would be if we all had you in our corners cheering us on with such love and support. This is a beautiful piece you’ve written. H🌷
Oh what a better place the world would be if we all had you in our corners cheering us on with such love and support. This is a beautiful piece you’ve written. H🌷
1

Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
3rd Oct 2020 5:35pm
thank you beautiful Honoria for reading and sharing your thoughts on this write such a lovely comment I feel the love I hope you feel my heart towards you... I cherish you 🌹
Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
26th Sep 2020 9:40pm
Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
3rd Oct 2020 3:30am
You've written an excellent epic piece here. I also like the picture to accompany it.
I've always found the idea of the metamorphosis intriguing and beautiful. Your verse is true of the form and concept from beginning to end.
Bravo.
I've always found the idea of the metamorphosis intriguing and beautiful. Your verse is true of the form and concept from beginning to end.
Bravo.
1

Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
3rd Oct 2020 10:59pm
thank you graciously dearest Wally for reading and leaving such a thoughtful comment...I deeply cherish you ❤
Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
23rd Jun 2022 00:32am
Crimsin u alright!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a spectacular piece of heart to heart touch hold me close.
1

Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
23rd Jun 2022 00:33am
thank you graciously dearest Birchel she's special to me I deeply appreciate the love here 💕
Re: Re. the becoming for the beautiful Neoma
23rd Jun 2022 00:38am