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[2020] Sacrilegious Psycho'me'try of Sacred Cow Pi Geometry leads to Bovined Encephalopathic Spongiformations
Black Magic
How tragic
Fever, hemorrhagic
burns across your brow
Gored, your Sacred Cow
Learned a hard earned lesson
now didn't you?
Sickness
of a nameless demon
having traveled through
Ouija board from Nether Region
infecting your gourd
Oh, Lord!
Published 23rd Sep 2020
| Edited 18th Dec 2020
Author's Note
for the comp "THE 'DARK' MINIMALIST !" @
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11573/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11573/
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23rd Sep 2020 8:36pm
From the title I was reckoning on a poem in the genre of 'New-Age vegan hippy has smoked too much dope and flipped into darkness' - pretty cool.
23rd Sep 2020 8:48pm
23rd Sep 2020 8:41pm
Not only do I really dig this, but I am a huge fan of long titles for short poems*
*when used with proper restraint, of course
*when used with proper restraint, of course
23rd Sep 2020 8:52pm
I resorted to using the UmaRobber rhythm method of titillating title-ations!
23rd Sep 2020 8:42pm
Sounds like a psilocybin trip gone wrong.
Or actual black magic gone right.
*shrug*
Or actual black magic gone right.
*shrug*
23rd Sep 2020 8:53pm
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24th Sep 2020 11:21am
Yo, JB. Gotta do something about those run-on titles, man.
Otherwise, kool for a lighthearted funny'o.
Otherwise, kool for a lighthearted funny'o.
24th Sep 2020 11:31am
You're da man, Danno. A laugh out of you is worth a hundred coffee spit takes.
24th Sep 2020 3:51pm
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3rd Oct 2020 2:53am
Me: Pretty catchy title, I wonder how one can overcome the minimal word count...Oh!
Also me: After a second read, I realize how dark this is.
Nicely done JB. Always catchy and well crafted.
Also me: After a second read, I realize how dark this is.
Nicely done JB. Always catchy and well crafted.
3rd Oct 2020 5:24pm
I figured I'd give Uma a run for her money with a titanic title of my own. Then I realized long titles were discouraged and I was like, Too late now!
Thank you, Wally!
Thank you, Wally!
