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Anatomy Of A Dragon VI : The Dark Age of Literature
Enough!
Dispense with these
feudal attempts; your poetry
is not up to snuff
Get it through your head
---I am a dragon!
Not in the business
of blowing smoke up your ass;
here to light a fire
under it instead
Published 23rd Sep 2020
| Edited 9th Nov 2021
Author's Note
for the comp "THE 'DARK' MINIMALIST !" @
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11573/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11573/
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23rd Sep 2020 6:33pm
24th Sep 2020 10:02pm
23rd Sep 2020 7:29pm
I gather Magnetron has enormous CPU capacity but even so, fitting lines with exactly 12 syllables to exactly 40 words overall whilst maintaining the essential feel unchanged with an extra stress on the 6th & 12th syllables of each line would be quite a challenge.
23rd Sep 2020 8:32pm
Nobody said it would be easy..............but what class that would be...when it also meant amending here and there. Regards, Robert.
24th Sep 2020 10:06pm
23rd Sep 2020 11:44pm
24th Sep 2020 10:10pm
Mister Malthus, I will let you roast marshmallows over my pilot light any time.
