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Blink
Young from bright peak views
endless horizon of firsts
they’ve no time to lose
too soon comes valley of lasts
where is sung the goodbye blues
endless horizon of firsts
they’ve no time to lose
too soon comes valley of lasts
where is sung the goodbye blues
Published 23rd Sep 2020
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Inspired by the "Goodbye like..." comp.
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Life passes by in the blink of an eye... Succinct way of putting it, Gahddess. Best of luck in the comp 🙏
23rd Sep 2020 9:03am
Thank you so much, NB! I hesitated using that title but you have proven that it's understood exactly the way I intended. I am uplifted by your kind words of encouragement.
23rd Sep 2020 9:06am
I think the title is a good fit. It was my pleasure... keep up the great writing 😊❤️
23rd Sep 2020 1:13pm
23rd Sep 2020 5:10pm
Ain't that the truth...or to be more 21st century true dat 😀 When one of my kids gets married I'm gonna lose it...
"Sunrise, sunset
Sunrise, sunset
Swiftly flow the days
Seedlings turn overnight to sunflowers
Blossoming even as we gaze"
"Sunrise, sunset
Sunrise, sunset
Swiftly flow the days
Seedlings turn overnight to sunflowers
Blossoming even as we gaze"
