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Peace—Acrostic
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 21st Sep 2020
Author's Note
Non-entry for the International Day of Peace Comp: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11581/
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Re. Peace—Acrostic
Anonymous
21st Sep 2020 5:44pm
My day was internationally peaceful until you forced me to look up three new words.
Love the enJAMbment at the end of this.
p.s. All that blue and white is calming my seas.
xo
Love the enJAMbment at the end of this.
p.s. All that blue and white is calming my seas.
xo
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22nd Sep 2020 6:04pm
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22nd Sep 2020 8:18pm
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22nd Sep 2020 8:28pm
Re. Peace—Acrostic
21st Sep 2020 7:20pm
I'm with Johnny, lol. Had to look up some words. Nicely done, Ahavati, it's very elegant. Furthermore, the image is very aptly chosen, and perfectly accompanies the 'peace' theme. Beautiful ❤️
Oh, and happy peace day! 🙏☮️
Oh, and happy peace day! 🙏☮️
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21st Sep 2020 8:11pm
Re. Peace—Acrostic
21st Sep 2020 8:57pm
Wow. Love the poem and the word usage. A plus on this one, Ahvanti.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Peace—Acrostic
21st Sep 2020 9:46pm
Re. Peace—Acrostic
21st Sep 2020 9:56pm
Wonderful Ahavati . . Needed to look up a few words myself .. nothing wrong with learning something new every day .. the image speaks along with your words ..
Hoping your day has been Peace - full 💙🙏
Hoping your day has been Peace - full 💙🙏
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21st Sep 2020 10:16pm
Re. Peace—Acrostic
21st Sep 2020 11:09pm
Dictionary out lol. Precise and powerful A...I often find that the most externally violent people are those that have a great internal battle going on. Bravo my friend.
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
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Re: Re. Peace—Acrostic
21st Sep 2020 11:10pm
Indeed, my friend. I figured keeping poets busy looking up words would keep them out of trouble. :D
Our actions are indeed mirror our insides. May all beings find and then become peace.
Namaste, Harry. 🙏
Our actions are indeed mirror our insides. May all beings find and then become peace.
Namaste, Harry. 🙏
Re. Peace—Acrostic
21st Sep 2020 11:41pm
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21st Sep 2020 11:43pm
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21st Sep 2020 11:45pm
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21st Sep 2020 11:46pm
Re. Peace—Acrostic
22nd Sep 2020 00:24am
Dear A,
My wish would be that those who cause discord would actually understand this themselves and just stop. Beautiful write. We continue to live in hope someday peace should reign everywhere.
H🌷
My wish would be that those who cause discord would actually understand this themselves and just stop. Beautiful write. We continue to live in hope someday peace should reign everywhere.
H🌷
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Re: Re. Peace—Acrostic
I agree, Honoria. It's unfortunate that shit is so difficult to clean up once it's hit the fan. But, as I've said elsewhere, we can bring to light and clean it up once and for all; or, we can throw a rug over it and allow it to rot, fester, and stink to high heaven.
Thank you, my friend. :)
Thank you, my friend. :)
Re. Peace—Acrostic
22nd Sep 2020 00:28am
Sometimes the simplest thoughts are the most difficult to understand! Great write... those of us who see chaos and experienced death are more tuned in...
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22nd Sep 2020 00:33am
Re. Peace—Acrostic
27th Sep 2020 5:53pm
Sorry I missed this.
I thought it was some kind of poetry game. How lame is that?
Most certainly you influence so many other poets here, that It really boggles me mynde sometimes.
"Most Influential" indeed describes you, dear.
I thought it was some kind of poetry game. How lame is that?
Most certainly you influence so many other poets here, that It really boggles me mynde sometimes.
"Most Influential" indeed describes you, dear.
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27th Sep 2020 6:38pm
Re. Peace—Acrostic
2nd Oct 2020 11:29pm
It's not everyday that a poem makes me look up a couple of words in the dictionary and yet it all flows so well.
In these trying times, it's great that you bring such bright and hopeful things to our attention.
Thank you for sharing.
Well done.
In these trying times, it's great that you bring such bright and hopeful things to our attention.
Thank you for sharing.
Well done.
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2nd Oct 2020 11:32pm