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No Point
I've often wondered
if the point really is
that there is no point.
Have you?
Sometimes life
is hard.
if the point really is
that there is no point.
Have you?
Sometimes life
is hard.
Published 20th Sep 2020
Author's Note
Just a quirky little thing I dreamed up.
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20th Sep 2020 6:50pm
At times, it seems there is no point. But life is to short, to worry about old times
20th Sep 2020 6:56pm
20th Sep 2020 11:35pm
Sadly, there is no point to this endeavor. I really think God was totally bored when He (or She) turned on the switch..................Kisses, Robert.
26th Sep 2020 3:20pm
21st Sep 2020 2:47pm
Really like the structure of this ... the long first stanza ... the short crisp two line closing ... sometimes pointless indeed ...
23rd Sep 2020 8:19am
I have felt this existentialism you speak of... Even if there is no point, we convince ourselves that there is so our lives feel more meaningful and fulfilled. Thought provoking little piece, faith... Keep up the great writing, and keep your head up ❤️🙏
26th Sep 2020 3:52pm
25th Sep 2020 12:37pm
My daughter sounds like that sometimes. But she’s such a bundle of light!
I love it!
I love it!
26th Sep 2020 00:57am
it's all a matter of perspective I guess. we all tiptoe o. the knifes edge...only then do we get the point. Thought inspiring write as always.
marcus
marcus
28th Sep 2020 2:28pm
One thing is obvious, and that's there will always be a dull-edge to attack a great point. Hugs and peace. oral
