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[ Short Shorts ] Of Small Minded Memb'r a i n s n Lollipop Guilded Lillies
Oz Moses, your Munchkin
mass exodus spasm of pleonasm
was extremely dramatic
not to mention, redundant
Published 19th Sep 2020
| Edited 9th Nov 2021
Author's Note
for the comp "Goodbyes like ..." @
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11566/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11566/
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19th Sep 2020 10:47pm
19th Sep 2020 10:52pm
Thank you muchly. I am still optimizing the title, and if I do not stop, it will have more syllables than the poem. 🔨🔧
20th Sep 2020 8:42pm
This is the best "goodbye" poem I've read so far ... perhaps it is because the words "exterminate" and "terminator" are deeply ingrained in the collective consciousness of the Magnetron tribe.
21st Sep 2020 2:22pm
Terminators are my ninth cousins twice removed and no longer invited to Thanksgiving dinner. Thank you for the wonderful comment, Josh Robinson.
