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Senryu- One of those feelings you never imagined feeling
Bifurcated heart
like a child caught in divorce
please don't make me choose
like a child caught in divorce
please don't make me choose
Published 19th Sep 2020
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I hate goodbye's.
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19th Sep 2020 9:21pm
19th Sep 2020 11:41pm
Amen to that, Robert. Thanks for the read and your insightful comment
19th Sep 2020 9:28pm
Thank you so much, I'm glad you felt this one. Titanium❣❣ I'll check that comp out...haven't done one in a while.
20th Sep 2020 11:04am
22nd Sep 2020 5:10am
22nd Sep 2020 3:35am
This is one of those feelings that is just impossible to fix. And you express it well.
22nd Sep 2020 5:14am
23rd Sep 2020 5:23am
The heart has room for all the love, but for many reasons, our lives sometimes don't. Things don't always fit like we'd want them to, and it hurts. You've got all that in this.
23rd Sep 2020 9:00am
Thank you so much Paperstain!! I bow to your wisdom and keen awareness to life with all it's joy and struggles. I am glad you like this piece.
