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Heaven✈️
( a Rensaku = linked Tanka )
✈️
before Corona,
Mother had stepped out of time
just before morning,
and into eternity—
It was brief, but beautiful
✈️
her journey blessed me,
and taught me about heaven;
I knew she was there
with the sunrise at her back,
and I’ll miss her till we meet
✈️
I, unplanned, arrived
when her first 2 daughters
were young women,
and so our parents began
to start all over again
✈️
free as a sparrow—
as a child I felt airborne
in the semi-arid
foothills overlooking
the valley sage and gullies
✈️
I was age three when
for my first flight with mother
and my fabric doll
on a local coastal trip,
hidden for a few minutes
✈️
The plane leveled off—
my face against the portal,
slowly through the clouds
angels flickered in their flight,
“I’m in heaven!” as I smiled
✈️
too soon, it was time—
trips on 4-engine prop planes
can’t last forever
it was brief, but beautiful,
while I have come full circle
✈️
✈️
before Corona,
Mother had stepped out of time
just before morning,
and into eternity—
It was brief, but beautiful
✈️
her journey blessed me,
and taught me about heaven;
I knew she was there
with the sunrise at her back,
and I’ll miss her till we meet
✈️
I, unplanned, arrived
when her first 2 daughters
were young women,
and so our parents began
to start all over again
✈️
free as a sparrow—
as a child I felt airborne
in the semi-arid
foothills overlooking
the valley sage and gullies
✈️
I was age three when
for my first flight with mother
and my fabric doll
on a local coastal trip,
hidden for a few minutes
✈️
The plane leveled off—
my face against the portal,
slowly through the clouds
angels flickered in their flight,
“I’m in heaven!” as I smiled
✈️
too soon, it was time—
trips on 4-engine prop planes
can’t last forever
it was brief, but beautiful,
while I have come full circle
✈️
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