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The Weight of Love

Love: defined by word
Or deed?
Words carry weight,
And yet,
They can be empty.
Action demonstrates the meaning.

The meaning may vary- or
Change, depending on the one
Who holds your heart.

Your heart, tucked beneath
Sternum and rib; a quivering
Funnel pushing love through
Caverns of surfeit emotion.

Surfeit emotion, lost
In the winding halls of saphenous
Blue; superfluous in the
Wake of loveís rapture.

Rapture, igniting
The Hemispheres of Earth
And body; burning the core
Of you.
To experience love is to
Know love.
Eerie
Author's Note
Written for faithmairee's "For The Love" comp.

I was inspired by Strangeways_Rob and his Andhaathi (Anthaathi) piece found...
Written for faithmairee's "For The Love" comp.

I was inspired by Strangeways_Rob and his Andhaathi (Anthaathi) piece found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/396077-diving-for-broken-bottles/

I have no idea if I did this correctly, but it was fun to challenge myself with something new.
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