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Waterfall
I remember our nights
Throughout the day
You are the key
That opens my lock
Your color is my shade
We grew together
While love took hold
And naked in the dark
Passion consumes us
My nails rake your skin
Leaving bloody traces
As you taste me
Your tongue is magical
Sensations exploding
My mind is blown
Eager to take you
Into my mouth
Teasing you with my tongue
I feel your powerful thrust
As your hands grasp my hair
Shoving deep inside
Pulsing and eager to cum
Throbbing, desperate and
dying to release
Struggling not to gag
I slow my stroke
Along your hot shaft
As I touch myself
Let this never end
I play with you
Bringing us both
to the edge
Over and over again
I cannot live without you
Each night, again I
become your waterfall
Turbulent and exciting
Movements a dance
Burning with you
In our dark paradise
Pull me tight against you
Sometimes I struggle
But I want you to hold me
tight in your strong arms
To exert control
Gazing into your eyes
As you penetrate deep
I shudder and moan
And I squeeze tight
Your manhood my escape
From a stressful life
Tasting your sweat
As I bite your shoulder
Your kiss is the gateway
But your precious elixir
Is the reason I live
Pleasing you is my purpose
Your sweet release
Fills me with happiness
The only anti-depressant
For me, I gave up
on doctors long ago
Spasms and contractions
Are my happiness
To feel you in me
Rocking my hips
Feeling you pulsate
I want this feeling to
last forever
A sweet torture builds
And only when all
the energy is spent
do you explode inside me
Filling me with warmth
Deep as once again
I become your waterfall
Alluring but dangerous
Sweaty bodies in a
beautiful embrace
A little embarrassed by
waterfall soaked sheets
But not for long as
I dive down once more
To take you in my mouth
Because the intermission
is over, after all I have
a lot of anxiety and
so I need a lot of
of this medication
Throughout the day
You are the key
That opens my lock
Your color is my shade
We grew together
While love took hold
And naked in the dark
Passion consumes us
My nails rake your skin
Leaving bloody traces
As you taste me
Your tongue is magical
Sensations exploding
My mind is blown
Eager to take you
Into my mouth
Teasing you with my tongue
I feel your powerful thrust
As your hands grasp my hair
Shoving deep inside
Pulsing and eager to cum
Throbbing, desperate and
dying to release
Struggling not to gag
I slow my stroke
Along your hot shaft
As I touch myself
Let this never end
I play with you
Bringing us both
to the edge
Over and over again
I cannot live without you
Each night, again I
become your waterfall
Turbulent and exciting
Movements a dance
Burning with you
In our dark paradise
Pull me tight against you
Sometimes I struggle
But I want you to hold me
tight in your strong arms
To exert control
Gazing into your eyes
As you penetrate deep
I shudder and moan
And I squeeze tight
Your manhood my escape
From a stressful life
Tasting your sweat
As I bite your shoulder
Your kiss is the gateway
But your precious elixir
Is the reason I live
Pleasing you is my purpose
Your sweet release
Fills me with happiness
The only anti-depressant
For me, I gave up
on doctors long ago
Spasms and contractions
Are my happiness
To feel you in me
Rocking my hips
Feeling you pulsate
I want this feeling to
last forever
A sweet torture builds
And only when all
the energy is spent
do you explode inside me
Filling me with warmth
Deep as once again
I become your waterfall
Alluring but dangerous
Sweaty bodies in a
beautiful embrace
A little embarrassed by
waterfall soaked sheets
But not for long as
I dive down once more
To take you in my mouth
Because the intermission
is over, after all I have
a lot of anxiety and
so I need a lot of
of this medication
Written by
KristinaX
Published 10th Sep 2020
Author's Note
Stepping out of my comfort zone (or into it ;p) to post this one.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Waterfall
10th Sep 2020 9:26pm
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10th Sep 2020 10:39pm
I always enjoy orgasmic bliss. Thanks for the comment; I am really glad you liked it. :)
Re. Waterfall
10th Sep 2020 9:38pm
I was on the edge of my seat all the way through this magical movie. WOW!!!!! Peace. oral
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10th Sep 2020 10:39pm
Re. Waterfall
Dear Kristina, I am pleasantly exhausted having merely read this exciting, sensual piece❣❣ Makes me think of a slightly modified movie quote, "I'll have what he's having." I love this prescription of sex as a remedy for anxiety and depression and therefore my favorite exhilarating passage is,
"after all I have
a lot of anxiety and
so I need a lot of
of this medication"
The title is indicative of the pure surge of natural energy to come.
Bravissima Goddess BD😍
"after all I have
a lot of anxiety and
so I need a lot of
of this medication"
The title is indicative of the pure surge of natural energy to come.
Bravissima Goddess BD😍
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Re: Re. Waterfall
10th Sep 2020 10:39pm
'pure surge of natural energy to come' perfectly said as usual. It is the best prescription. I appreciate the comment and compliment, as always.
Re. Waterfall
10th Sep 2020 10:19pm
Beautiful, sexy, seductive
Absolutely awesome piece
Love and light
Ron x
Absolutely awesome piece
Love and light
Ron x
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10th Sep 2020 10:40pm
Re. Waterfall
11th Sep 2020 4:10am
Kristina,
Thank you for stepping outside your comfort zone to share this.
I really thought the image of the “waterfall” was sexy and so deeply personal. It’s so wonderful when lovers can ignore those little passion-fueled embarrassments to celebrate the intense connections made.
The theme of sex as an antidepressant Is so interesting...and you shared it with such raw emotion and honesty!
Your narrator is clearly a very generous lover!
Thank you for stepping outside your comfort zone to share this.
I really thought the image of the “waterfall” was sexy and so deeply personal. It’s so wonderful when lovers can ignore those little passion-fueled embarrassments to celebrate the intense connections made.
The theme of sex as an antidepressant Is so interesting...and you shared it with such raw emotion and honesty!
Your narrator is clearly a very generous lover!
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11th Sep 2020 9:20pm
Thanks RPM, I am glad you found the image of waterfall as deeply personal because that is how it feels to me as well. Sex is an anti-depressant. :)
Re. Waterfall
11th Sep 2020 4:30am
Dear K,
The relationship between the action and the reaction used in quelling anxiety was very nicely associated and expressed. Super original.
“ For me, I gave up
on doctors long ago
Spasms and contractions
Are my happiness“ Love the anecdote, great idea! Seems it would save a ton in copays.
Very well done. ;-).
H🌷
The relationship between the action and the reaction used in quelling anxiety was very nicely associated and expressed. Super original.
“ For me, I gave up
on doctors long ago
Spasms and contractions
Are my happiness“ Love the anecdote, great idea! Seems it would save a ton in copays.
Very well done. ;-).
H🌷
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11th Sep 2020 9:21pm
Thanks H, it is definitely one of my anxiety coping measures. (the best one) :) 'save a ton in copays' absolutely. ;)
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12th Sep 2020 10:23pm
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12th Sep 2020 11:31pm
Re. Waterfall
12th Sep 2020 10:31pm
I had no idea I was an anti-depressant drug supplier! : )
Very hot write and immensely enjoyable read.
Very hot write and immensely enjoyable read.
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Re: Re. Waterfall
12th Sep 2020 10:36pm
Now you know. Make sure you maintain the patent, you don't want to become generic. Thanks DaVinci.
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14th Sep 2020 6:50am
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13th Sep 2020 11:59pm
The orgasm...when even we non-believers shout and praise god. A beautiful hot orgasmic poem, Kristina.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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14th Sep 2020 1:04am
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16th Sep 2020 9:54pm
Nice bold sensual write ... congrats for stepping out of your comfort zone ... great flow ... good line breaks ... the cadence is spot on ...
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Re: Re. Waterfall
16th Sep 2020 10:08pm
Thanks LDF! I really appreciate your thoughts a lot. Being different from any of my previous ones, even more so on this one. :)
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Re: Re. Waterfall
27th Nov 2020 8:33pm
Thank you for the comment and compliment Tim, and reaching back to find this one. Generally I am reluctant to post erotic poems so it is not surprising you did not know. But sometimes I do it anyway. :)
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Re. Waterfall
Wow! This erotic write is deliciously executed. Your talent and range in verse stimulates more then just the mind with this steamy write, lol. Seriously this captivating composition had me salivating with your every word of this erotic art..... ''My nails rake your skin
Leaving bloody traces
As you taste me
Your tongue is magical
Sensations exploding
My mind is blown"....... my favorite tasty morsel of your amazing submission of erotica. Your fingers/nails are writing erotic art on the surface of bare skin and those traces of blood translate to the amazing ink that you laid down on paper about to catch fire. I find myself reveling in this steamy write of pure ecstasy. Wow KX!!!
Leaving bloody traces
As you taste me
Your tongue is magical
Sensations exploding
My mind is blown"....... my favorite tasty morsel of your amazing submission of erotica. Your fingers/nails are writing erotic art on the surface of bare skin and those traces of blood translate to the amazing ink that you laid down on paper about to catch fire. I find myself reveling in this steamy write of pure ecstasy. Wow KX!!!
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16th Dec 2020 11:36pm
Now your just showing off, I love this so much "Your fingers/nails are writing erotic art on the surface of bare skin and those traces of blood translate to the amazing ink that you laid down on paper about to catch fire." That seems like it came straight from a gorgeous poem about writing erotica. I am so happy you were able to get immersed in this one. I know I was. ;) And I love Wows, not sure I have ever had a comment open and close with one so that is great. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment and encouragement. 💖 xoxo
Re. Waterfall
9th Feb 2021 11:25pm
Holy Grail
Holy Fuck
No wonder I can't
sleep
Finally a poem that demands that FUCKING RL
LIKE
PUTS ALL OTHER EROTIC WRITING ON THIS CESSPOOL SITE TO SHAME
WINK
Holy Fuck
No wonder I can't
sleep
Finally a poem that demands that FUCKING RL
LIKE
PUTS ALL OTHER EROTIC WRITING ON THIS CESSPOOL SITE TO SHAME
WINK
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Re: Re. Waterfall
10th Feb 2021 9:32pm
I have been searching for the holy grail for so long, did I finally find it? :p Holy fuck - heading to the church; it's been so long since I fucked in church.
I am here to keep you awake... Melting in a puddle of me. (yeah that cums from between the legs.)
LOVE
Well you sure know how to shut me up! No doubt multiple ways. lol
SMILE 💖 xoxo
I am here to keep you awake... Melting in a puddle of me. (yeah that cums from between the legs.)
LOVE
Well you sure know how to shut me up! No doubt multiple ways. lol
SMILE 💖 xoxo
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23rd Feb 2021 6:11pm
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6th Apr 2021 2:55am
Hey Gyco! I am glad you reached back and this one was to your liking. The chainsaw comment sure elicited some imagery for me. I like turning things on, you know like phrases and other things. lol Ah, yes lipstick stains; on the lips, the neck, the ... There might be some bite marks and nail scrapes too (not on the most important part though). :p But that's because I get excited and it's always an experience. ;)
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Re: Re. Waterfall
6th Apr 2021 12:05pm
Thanks Claude, I will definitely have to watch that movie, with a quote like that it must be good. ;) I would love to hear how you think I progressed some day... If nothing else you will find variety. :)
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