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Human hues
She slipped clumsily in a café
Looked all around her
from the corner of her eye
Felt all eyes upon her
Bit her lip
and flushed crimson
most disconcertedly.
He was sacked,
literally fired
Got down in the dumps
Was down and out
and was left feeling
blue real gloomily.
He gave her a blossomed rose
Blood rushed to her cheeks
She blushed a deep red
so very joyously.
She watched her rival from afar
envy surged in her quite in reflex
and she turned green jealously.
It looked hale and hearty
Ooh the cherubic chubby cheeks
Baby looked in the pink
as it babbled away innocently.
She heard of a loved one's demise.
That was a shock indeed
She went white as a sheet
as she then wept so woefully.
She saw a teeny-weeny spider on her skirts
Talk of arachnids and phobias, yikes!
She turned a pale yellow in fright
as she screamed so fearfully.
He found his sweetheart
in another man's arms
Doubted his own charms
and his face went purple with rage
oh so wrathfully
He faced his lifelong enemy
Hate brimmed up in him
as his bitterness found a vent
He shot him a black glare
how very scornfully
Well, well, it might seem that the worst of all the human hues
are the melancholic depressing blues
But I think being green for jealousy
and the black of hate
top the list in deserving poohs.
Mind you these human pigmentation of emotions
are a matter of reflex
for you can't choose
which of the human hues
you'd like to wear, on party day
and which you'd rather not use
but we can always try to reign them in
when it comes to the bad emotions...
(The colours of our emotions, each stanza describes different emotions and the colours they are represented by in English.)
Looked all around her
from the corner of her eye
Felt all eyes upon her
Bit her lip
and flushed crimson
most disconcertedly.
He was sacked,
literally fired
Got down in the dumps
Was down and out
and was left feeling
blue real gloomily.
He gave her a blossomed rose
Blood rushed to her cheeks
She blushed a deep red
so very joyously.
She watched her rival from afar
envy surged in her quite in reflex
and she turned green jealously.
It looked hale and hearty
Ooh the cherubic chubby cheeks
Baby looked in the pink
as it babbled away innocently.
She heard of a loved one's demise.
That was a shock indeed
She went white as a sheet
as she then wept so woefully.
She saw a teeny-weeny spider on her skirts
Talk of arachnids and phobias, yikes!
She turned a pale yellow in fright
as she screamed so fearfully.
He found his sweetheart
in another man's arms
Doubted his own charms
and his face went purple with rage
oh so wrathfully
He faced his lifelong enemy
Hate brimmed up in him
as his bitterness found a vent
He shot him a black glare
how very scornfully
Well, well, it might seem that the worst of all the human hues
are the melancholic depressing blues
But I think being green for jealousy
and the black of hate
top the list in deserving poohs.
Mind you these human pigmentation of emotions
are a matter of reflex
for you can't choose
which of the human hues
you'd like to wear, on party day
and which you'd rather not use
but we can always try to reign them in
when it comes to the bad emotions...
(The colours of our emotions, each stanza describes different emotions and the colours they are represented by in English.)
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Re. Human hues
10th Sep 2020 1:16pm
So original and brilliantly conceived how you illustrated each emotion through its corresponding color. Love how your took jealousy and painted scenes with it like a maestro artist. I could see each scene and feel the frustration of losing his job and seeing his sweetheart in the arms of another. Creatively on fire my friend.
John
John
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Re: Re. Human hues
10th Sep 2020 1:24pm
Thanks soo much for your cool super comment, a nice review indeed. I enjoyed reading your thoughts on it. Cheers and best wishes,
Re. Human hues
10th Sep 2020 1:19pm
I like the structure of this ... nice flow ... pulled me in ... swept me along ...
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Re: Re. Human hues
10th Sep 2020 1:27pm
I'm glad it swept yah along into poetic reality blended realms. Warmest thanks for your refined lovely nice comment. Take care.
Re. Human hues
10th Sep 2020 2:16pm
That is so true, Zaynab!
Mind you these human pigmentation of emotions
are a matter of reflex
I keep thinking of the phrase. . .be Vulcan!
I enjoyed the imagery of this very much.
Mind you these human pigmentation of emotions
are a matter of reflex
I keep thinking of the phrase. . .be Vulcan!
I enjoyed the imagery of this very much.
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Re: Re. Human hues
10th Sep 2020 2:27pm
Hi again, warm thanks for your feedback and thoughts though I don't know what you mean by Vulcan. Take care. ☺️😇
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10th Sep 2020 2:45pm
Re: Re. Human hues
10th Sep 2020 2:49pm
Oh thanks for replying, I haven't watched star trek. Good word you taught me.
Re. Human hues
10th Sep 2020 2:52pm
It would be idyllic if I could pick my own color of emotion when I needed and not be subject to life's random "choices" for me. I found this an interesting take on our human conditions... Thank you for sharing.
I'm glad you did
💜
B
I'm glad you did
💜
B
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Re: Re. Human hues
10th Sep 2020 3:03pm
Yeah me too. our emotions show even when we don't want them to.
My warmest thanks for a nice super comment I enjoyed reading your take on it. 🌷
My warmest thanks for a nice super comment I enjoyed reading your take on it. 🌷
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10th Sep 2020 4:05pm
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Re. Human hues
10th Sep 2020 5:24pm
Indeed not only is the spark of emotion not predictable but it is subject to change as one gets older.
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10th Sep 2020 5:51pm
Hey, thanks so much for your fine comment, your words added to my muse.
Re. Human hues
10th Sep 2020 6:41pm
Very good emotions poem, I see the images of the colors in the emotions. Keep on writing.
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10th Sep 2020 7:34pm
Thanks a bunch for your nice comment, you summed it up swell. Cheers!
Re. Human hues
10th Sep 2020 9:09pm
I liked this from the start to the end and wanted to re-read it over and over - thank you
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Re: Re. Human hues
11th Sep 2020 7:03am
Aw my warmest thanks for such a sweet lovely comment, you made me smile at your nice heart. Take care always. 🌷🌹
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11th Sep 2020 7:04am
Re. Human hues
10th Sep 2020 10:38pm
Interesting way of looking at emotions - they cover all colours of the spectrum and the little cameos highlight to notion in a very readable manner.
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11th Sep 2020 7:05am
Wow thanks for a very interesting great comment! Much obliged, have a good day poet!!
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10th Sep 2020 10:50pm
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11th Sep 2020 7:06am
I'm glad you think so, thanks a bunch for that cool comment, I'm curious to check out yours too. Best wishes,
Re. Human hues
11th Sep 2020 7:18am
Awesome poem Zaynab...a powerful painting of colour and emotions. Bravo!!!
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. Human hues
11th Sep 2020 7:47am
Heyy thanks soo much for that super great comment , feels nice coming from a great poet like you. Best wishes,
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Anonymous
12th Sep 2020 4:19am
Very colorful & imaginative of color scene of life's emotions within. Can relate to them all. Enjoyed the read much my friend, continue to write in black & white 😍😂
Blessings
Blessings
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Re: Re. Human hues
12th Sep 2020 6:47am
Hey dear warmest thanks for that light nice fun comment. Take care.☺️🌷
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2020 8:02am
Likewise & you're welcome. Blessings & Stay Safe.🙏🏾😷
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Re. Human hues
13th Sep 2020 4:14am
The prism of life refracts our pure white soul into the many colors of the rainbow, that representing emotions. I like the vivid descriptions, very creative concept :)
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14th Sep 2020 10:09am
Re. Human hues
8th Dec 2020 10:04pm
This is spot on about emotions that's for sure some have a hard time controlling them, I know that's what started me writing as a teen I had so much built up pain and anger and frustration that I couldn't control it so a therapist once told me try writing them down that's how I started writing
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9th Dec 2020 3:20am
Thanks, and good you are doing great, express away, writing and prayer is what helps me too. 🌷
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Anonymous
10th Dec 2020 9:35pm
Nice illustration, flow, and originality keep up the great work!
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Re: Re. Human hues
11th Dec 2020 8:23am
Thanks soo much for comment, now I'm trying to recall if I have ever read yours too, I read a lot here.