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Oh Us Guys

Legends are crafted Don Juan revived
way men are socialized
stereotypes alive

Readily I acknowledge
surrender gladly I do
as if immortals wish it
divine elixir or stew

Oh yes I can start out
assertive and in charge
car is then making it’s way back to the garage

Yes no doubt she enjoys
the stiffness and play
but after that explosion
firmness has gone away

My downtown is eons
compared her rest time
singing for more
such an inviting chime

Know how some fellas
release then are done
little regard for the mate
wants to run

But what is so enticing
is when both release
at the very least
the roving eye will cease

So I carry no shame saying surrender is mine
path to bliss simple
lover in sync with my rhyme
JAZZMANOR
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