Content Warning : Do you want to continue?
This poem contains content which some readers may find disturbing.
It is unsuitable for children or anyone who is easily offended.

I am over 18 years old, I have been warned and I still want to read this poem.
I don't want to read this type of content, take me back to the previous page.


feel me enter feel me come
into the place where we are one
writhing squirming pulsating
squelching moaning vibrating

sensory shower in our entwined
bodies linked in mind to mind
rhythmic motion as if we were
synchronized inside a blur

of fingers touching in among
lips and probings by the tongue
and soft caresses amid thrusts
satisfying all our lusts...

feel me feel you feeling me
the way I feel you come to be
on the edge of letting go
as liquid love begins to flow

trickling oozing running down
with sliding in-and-out's wet sound
faster faster deeper in
as letting-go's paroxysm

lets me feel you feeling me
for an instant ecstasy
sharing all now we've become
for a moment we are one
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
Author's Note
Best listened to with headphones
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 1 reading list entries 0
comments 2 reads 137
Commenting Preference: 
The author is looking for friendly feedback.

Latest Forum Discussions
Today 4:53pm by Phantom2426
Today 4:45pm by Phantom2426
Today 4:43pm by Phantom2426
Today 4:33pm by Ahavati
Today 4:30pm by EdibleWords
Today 3:56pm by bushrabilal238