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not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
how an old shirt hangs
in back of a closet that
you cannot bear to
toss out
a cat sleeping undisturbed
in the rapture of sunlight
walking into a room
full of old friends where
laughter, sadness and
memories hang like
apples from a harvest
tree waiting to be
plucked
the last time you smiled
as a child with all the
radiant hope of a hundred
summer's gathering on
your face
the magic of frost painting
ice crystal runes on morning
windows in January
remembering the first
time that love hurt and
knowing now that it
could not have been
any other way
the savagery of youth
tearing it's way into
adulthood
the knowledge of
age...
...one lone candle
shining in the great
gothic cathedral of
a singular
life
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Re. not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
4th Sep 2020 4:15pm
Re: Re. not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
4th Sep 2020 4:25pm
Thank you Ahvanti.
Hope all is good in your corner of the world.
huggies,
buddhakitty.
Hope all is good in your corner of the world.
huggies,
buddhakitty.
Re: Re. not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
4th Sep 2020 4:41pm
Re. not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
4th Sep 2020 8:17pm
Re: Re. not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
4th Sep 2020 8:23pm
Re. not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
4th Sep 2020 8:25pm
Re: Re. not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
4th Sep 2020 8:28pm
Thank you InDreamz (lovely pen name btw). Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re: Re. not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
4th Sep 2020 8:29pm
Re. not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
4th Sep 2020 10:14pm
Re: Re. not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
4th Sep 2020 10:43pm
Re. not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
4th Sep 2020 11:05pm
Memories of moments , followed by a vision ;
Nicely constructed , and your conveyance was excellent , my friend...
"...one lone candle
shining in the great
gothic cathedral of
a singular
life"
Nicely constructed , and your conveyance was excellent , my friend...
"...one lone candle
shining in the great
gothic cathedral of
a singular
life"
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Re: Re. not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
4th Sep 2020 11:43pm
Re. not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
5th Sep 2020 4:13am
Dear BK,
Each stanza had a memory for me. This collection of vignettes was so touching and thoughtful as I reread it even more memories were unlocked and revisited. “ remembering the first
time that love hurt and
knowing now that it
could not have been
any other way ” especially as there were soooooo many first time loves that hurt. Beautiful write.
H🌷
Each stanza had a memory for me. This collection of vignettes was so touching and thoughtful as I reread it even more memories were unlocked and revisited. “ remembering the first
time that love hurt and
knowing now that it
could not have been
any other way ” especially as there were soooooo many first time loves that hurt. Beautiful write.
H🌷
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Re: Re. not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
5th Sep 2020 7:44am
I am pleased that you found meaning in my work Honoria. Thank you so much.
huggies,
buddhakitty.
huggies,
buddhakitty.
Re. not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
12th Sep 2020 1:21pm
Re: Re. not so profound, but nevertheless, beautiful
12th Sep 2020 2:05pm