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She Sits Comfortably
You can tell
by the warmth in her breath
that her toes do not freeze
as fast as mine.
by the warmth in her breath
that her toes do not freeze
as fast as mine.
Published 26th Jan 2012
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7th Jul 2012 11:15pm
What I like about this poem is it really makes me wonder ... where are you sitting? what are you wearing? Why don't you turn up the heat or put on a warm pair of wool socks? If your're both under the covers maybe you can do something that'll heat you both up? I have a conucopia of suggestions, but you might not bend that way ;-)
