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Real

Waking up
Opened eyes
Day will start
Sun will rise

Rain will fall
Clouds will form
Storms will pass
Life is born

Time will change
People grow
Some afraid
Never know

Mountains high
Water deep
Ground and dirt
Then we sleep

Written words
Stories told
Message sent
Hidden gold

Some will miss
Some won't see
Some will leave
Some agree

Rhyme but true
Forced or sound
Poem made
Never found

I will end
I do ask
I will try
Only task

I do dream
That I can
Make it through
Hopeful man
Written by CosiestPrism273 (Jordan Kunkel)
Published
Author's Note
I'm not that good of a writer. I'm not an expert. I just enjoy putting words on a page. So I post. I think a lot. This helps to clear my mind. My rhymes are always thought to be forced. But my poems are always puzzles. Sometimes i do force. I've never been taught how to write poetry. Thank you for everyone who comments. I know my work is flawed.
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