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Poetically Speaking

Scurry around grasping at straws
The poet seeks to show you more
More of herself revealing her core
Just a peek, just a peek,
Beyond that closed door
 
A wounded heart a long lost love
Yet words fail they aren't enough
They fail to understand her stuff
Lost to them, lost to them
Metaphorically to rough
 
Her meter is off, clumsy they say
Grammartical errors rule her day
Spelling mistakes get in the way
Great attempt, great attempt
The poem is Ok
 
Seeing your poem through others eyes
For readers will always criticise
I'll try again, one has many tries
To improve, to improve
This poet will rise
HoneyLove
Written by HoneyLove
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Author's Note
When you try to write the perfect rhyme... is there ever a perfect line:) Inspired:)
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