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Fortune Cookie
My fortune cookie says
I was born to be No. 1
the problem is
it didn't say at what
so now I see
I will have to fill in
the blank myself
however, it would be
more fun if you did it
Just sayin' -
I was born to be No. 1
the problem is
it didn't say at what
so now I see
I will have to fill in
the blank myself
however, it would be
more fun if you did it
Just sayin' -
Published 28th Aug 2020
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
28th Aug 2020 10:46am
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28th Aug 2020 10:56am
28th Aug 2020 10:52am
This is so pithy in a fortune cookie way ... love the colloquial close ... like we were at dinner together at a Chinese restaurant ...
28th Aug 2020 10:55am
Yeah, like that. Exactly! Thank you for your lovely comments! I appreciate them!
28th Aug 2020 3:44pm
well I will need to
get to know your
body of works
in order to fill in that blank!
Nice write
get to know your
body of works
in order to fill in that blank!
Nice write
Perhaps so. Thank you very much for reading and responding to my little poem. It's much appreciated.
28th Aug 2020 4:48pm
29th Aug 2020 00:45am
28th Aug 2020 5:22pm
Hahaha! This is great! I have often wished the Universe would just give me the answer too!
29th Aug 2020 00:46am
Anonymous
29th Aug 2020 9:03am
Amazing!!!***
29th Aug 2020 9:31am
31st Aug 2020 1:28am
It was in the fortune cookie before it crumbled.....such is life, my sweet............
