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Pain so Pleasurable
Fingernails scratching down my back
Leaving raised red scratches
Then your fingertips caressing
Smearing the small red flecks of blood
Squeezing my nipples
Rolling them between finger and thumb
Hot candle wax dripping
Drying hard on burnt skin
Tongue licking my moistness
Fingers plunging
Teeth biting
at the sensitive skin
on the inside of my thigh
Hands caressing my face
Loving looks
Fingers knotted in my hair
Pulling my face down and into you
My breathe warm on your manhood
My lips wrapped around your hardness
You thrusting so deeply
Too deep...
Slamming into the back of my throat
No breath...
Tears flowing down my cheeks
But, so enjoying the taste of your cum
You kiss away my tears...
And know that....
My pain can be your pleasure...
and mine....
Leaving raised red scratches
Then your fingertips caressing
Smearing the small red flecks of blood
Squeezing my nipples
Rolling them between finger and thumb
Hot candle wax dripping
Drying hard on burnt skin
Tongue licking my moistness
Fingers plunging
Teeth biting
at the sensitive skin
on the inside of my thigh
Hands caressing my face
Loving looks
Fingers knotted in my hair
Pulling my face down and into you
My breathe warm on your manhood
My lips wrapped around your hardness
You thrusting so deeply
Too deep...
Slamming into the back of my throat
No breath...
Tears flowing down my cheeks
But, so enjoying the taste of your cum
You kiss away my tears...
And know that....
My pain can be your pleasure...
and mine....
Published 26th Jan 2012
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26th Jan 2012 1:27pm
I was thrilled.
If art must produce emotions. I think this poem succeeds in its intent.
Pain and pleasure, for long moments make us overcome our human weakness. Pain and pleasure run through the same channels and produce high doses of endorphins.
There shouldn't be no feelings of guilt, hate or contempt. Only a mutual agreement between two partners.
We must be aware that it is a game with limits that must not be exceeded.
If art must produce emotions. I think this poem succeeds in its intent.
Pain and pleasure, for long moments make us overcome our human weakness. Pain and pleasure run through the same channels and produce high doses of endorphins.
There shouldn't be no feelings of guilt, hate or contempt. Only a mutual agreement between two partners.
We must be aware that it is a game with limits that must not be exceeded.
28th Jan 2012 2:57am
Hi luca,
So pleased that you enjoyed my verse...
Question: aren't boundaries meant to be pushed to find out how far the limits can be stretched?
You don't have to answer that - just something that is in my own head - I like to push boundaries and like to find out my own limits that way..
Thanks for your time luca.
Cheers vixen
;-)x
So pleased that you enjoyed my verse...
Question: aren't boundaries meant to be pushed to find out how far the limits can be stretched?
You don't have to answer that - just something that is in my own head - I like to push boundaries and like to find out my own limits that way..
Thanks for your time luca.
Cheers vixen
;-)x
28th Jan 2012 10:16pm
Not to the extreme. When they could be fatal. I think.
But it is true that there is a wide horizon to explore.
But it is true that there is a wide horizon to explore.
26th Jan 2012 10:38pm
Short and sweet I will say;
For I love the way you play.
Feeling pleasure in that of pain;
For so much extasy that you can't contain.
To drawl blood and seep out love;
For all is emotion that may push and shove.
Pulling each other inside one another;
Leaving you breathless like no other.
Beautiful poem a true Aussie's work of art; to paint each others love onto each of them.
For I love the way you play.
Feeling pleasure in that of pain;
For so much extasy that you can't contain.
To drawl blood and seep out love;
For all is emotion that may push and shove.
Pulling each other inside one another;
Leaving you breathless like no other.
Beautiful poem a true Aussie's work of art; to paint each others love onto each of them.
28th Jan 2012 3:05am
Thanks Atropabelladonna
Always enjoy your comments...
Short and sweet is one of the ways
That this Aussie girl likes to play
Together mixing our love and blood
To enjoy and entice more of my own
juicy flood
I can be sweet too, at times ;-)
Cheers vixen ;-) x
Always enjoy your comments...
Short and sweet is one of the ways
That this Aussie girl likes to play
Together mixing our love and blood
To enjoy and entice more of my own
juicy flood
I can be sweet too, at times ;-)
Cheers vixen ;-) x
29th Jan 2012 3:48am
1st Feb 2012 8:43am
Hi nothIng_to_lose,
Thank you so much for dropping in and reading my work! So pleased that you enjoyed it!
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
Thank you so much for dropping in and reading my work! So pleased that you enjoyed it!
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
29th Jan 2012 5:31am
Ahh vixen, you're just too sexy for words, love it, back in the saddle again, thanks for the ride!
Cheers ;-)xx jiminy
Cheers ;-)xx jiminy
1st Feb 2012 8:53am
Hi jiminy,
Ye hah!! Hold on honey, while I sink the spurs in!!
Really loved that you liked it!
Cheers
Vixen ;-) x
Ye hah!! Hold on honey, while I sink the spurs in!!
Really loved that you liked it!
Cheers
Vixen ;-) x
1st Feb 2012 10:35am
And she rode him down the mountain like a torrent down it's bed! ;-)) cheers vixen xx
