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The Son of Jake Goes Deeper

This is the second chapter of following the Son of Jake. He's now in his teenage years and ready for the next step in his training.    
 
Pretty soon the new wore off    
I wanted more for thrills    
That’s when the Dark Cloud approached and said,    
“I’m calling on you to kill.”  
   
“You’ll receive the gifts that your father bore    
Your wishes will be fulfilled each day  
You’ll feel a sense of power gained    
From hunting for your prey”  
   
I learned that picking the freshest fruit    
Was my important task to do    
The Dark Cloud started visiting me  
As I learned and quickly grew    
   
The Cloud told me he had some treasures    
Not like my typical girls    
These would bring much more to life  
Each one a valued pearl    
   
I was sixteen and a pretty good boy in school  
But filled with a boy’s desire    
To get the things I wanted in life    
I'd become the best of liars  
   
The girl he showed me was seventeen  
She'd barely ever been kissed    
When I think back on that night  
And the pleasures I might have missed    
   
She smiled at me across the room    
My heart began to pound    
I marveled at her beauty    
Still wearing her virgin crown  
   
Then I felt the power of Cloud    
A tingling below my belly  
The girl marched up and held out her hand  
“Hi, my name is Sally.”    
   
Things happened fast she felt my spell    
We swam in a lake out back    
We hugged and kissed and touched a bit    
Then she showed me her lovely rack    
   
Her breasts were round and perky, too  
Her brown eyes filled with youth and light    
Her parents were wealthy and owned the field    
Where we first made love that night  
   
The next day Cloud came to me and said    
"It's time for you to end her life    
I said, "Please no, I want to keep her"  
"Have you forgotten what gives you might?"  
   
I'll show you just the right moment  
And the things that you must do    
This is the life of your calling    
Sally will be fine, you'll see her through    
   
That night I was with Sally    
Her virgin crown now gone    
I thrust into her with all my might    
I wished we could fuck till dawn  
   
Cloud said, "You must do the deed"  
"This songbird's singing will cease    
If you are careful and precise    
Young Sally will go in peace"  
   
I'd learned my father's skill with knife    
Where and how hard to press    
As we made love she saw my tears    
Then my knife unlocked her chest    
   
Cloud gave strength to my wavering will    
The knife sliced clean and deep  
Sally screamed in horror, "My God, why me?"    
Hurt filled eyes looked at me as blood began to seep  
   
In a moment she was silent but I was still inside    
As her warmth quietly faded    
I felt the power of possessing her life  
For pleasure her life was traded    
   
My heart now pounded with ecstasy    
How could this all be true  
In her death Sally brought thrills  
She made me feel brand new  
   
Into her dying body I continued to thrust    
When finally I pumped my cum inside    
While caressing her fading essence    
I whispered, "It's been quite a ride."    
   
Cloud's work was done the bargain was set    
My life and fate were ordered    
Whoever I loved from this point forward    
Was destined to be murdered or tortured  
   
"You've done well, "I heard the Cloud say  
Soon you'll think you're in heaven    
Run fast and far then get some rest    
Tomorrow will bring new transgression
Written by LostViking (Lost Viking)
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Author's Note
In "Learning How to Play," the Son of Jake found his sexual side. Now he goes deeper into his calling of evil.
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